22:09

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10.09pm, the rain and a phone call. All Hyunjin had to do was let go.

Foreword

this fic contains major character death. crossposted on ao3.

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PrettyChiisy
#1
Chapter 1: <span class='smalltext text--lighter'>Comment on <a href='/story/view/1387149/1'>but the truth remains, yo...</a></span>
You can have my upvote, you can have my subscribe, hell if I was rich I would even give you my money. First of all, how dare you make me emotional at 4 AM. I have to go to university in a few hours BUT priorities first. Wow it's been so long since I last cried from reading a fanfic (like two years I would say) and I read fanfics everyday so I always encounter sad stories all the time but, this one was so different from the usual sad stories I find occasionally. First off we have Seungjin being the soulmates they are and behaving like an adorable domestic couple, AAAHH I love them so freaking much, I just adore the way you wrote their relationship. So pure, so genuine. It just felt so natural and reading the small scenes where they are just being whipped for each other made me feel so happy.



(I would love to get another domestic Seungjin story from you but let's not trail off too much lol)



And then we get to the sad bits. Fast forward to when Seungmin was saying goodbye to Hyunjin in the last morning (knowing that he wasn't gonna come back) I started tearing up a little bit right then, but when Minnie said goodbye to Felix and Jisung, that's when I ing lost it. I imagined the whole scene like in a movie setting, with Seungmin smiling at them with a happy yet sad smile, and Lix and Jisung not having a clue about what's about to happen because they think they're going to see him later, but still smiling at him and waving him off. It broke my heart so much, in so many tiny little pieces. And then, the scene with Hyunjin arriving to the hospital when even though he was hurting so much, he tried to remain as composed as he could so Seungmin could go. The following day with Hyunjin crying his eyes out and Felix and Jisung joining him on the crying fest.



"And now one of them is gone, four turned into three"



Screw you, even while typing this comment I'm getting teary again (I'm not joking, I really am crying. I'm not even someone who cries easily, this T-T)



Aah anyways, enough with the long comment. Please do tell me your AO3 acc so I can follow you there, I would love to read more seungjin stories from you. If they're as good as this one, then sign me the fvxk up

Edit: OH WAIT turns out I already follow you on ao3 LMAO no wonder I liked this story so much; all of your seungjin works are masterpieces <3
rundaehyun
#2
Chapter 1: Let me tell you, i dont even know straykids, i need to even watch a video on youtube to know which one ia seungmin and which one is hyunjin. But damn, the feels... A friend tweets about this fic and being deprived of something good to read, i gave this a try. And boi did i cry. I cried a lot, like i was sobbing. It starts from seungmin wearing the same clothes as he wore on the day of the accident. And seungmin said "promise to check on him often", and how little hyunjin cried when he thought seungmin was gonna die from a scratch, but now it is the reality. Until when hyunjin finds the fridge full and basically everything!!! It feels like i was the one who is going to die, and at the same time i was the one who's gonna lost someone i love. This hurts me so much, thank you for sharing this!
daehyunshoulder
#3
this made me a sobbing messssss. pls i want more seungjin angst!
unicornluv
#4
Chapter 1: mY freAKinG hEaRt T-T
nanadjiyongie_01
#5
Chapter 1: aww this is so sad yet beautifully written..I love it so much T_T
lovewannaone
#6
Chapter 1: This is so beautiful ? SeungJin plays the role here perfectly <3 though the ending is sad, I still enjoyed reading it :)