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Hyunjin is 17 and has her entire life figured out already—she’s going to finish high school and become the soccer star she was born to be. That is, of course, until some random kid accidentally pushes her down a flight of stairs, shattering her knee, her wrist and her dreams, all at once.

Worst part of it all? Falling on top of Jeon Heejin, being forced to see her every day in physical therapy and discovering that, maybe, she isn’t as terrible as Hyunjin originally thought.

Foreword

Hyunjin is 17 and has her entire life figured out already—she’s going to finish high school and become the soccer star she was born to be. That is, of course, until some random kid accidentally pushes her down a flight of stairs, shattering her knee, her wrist and her dreams, all at once.

Worst part of it all? Falling on top of Jeon Heejin, being forced to see her every day in physical therapy and discovering that, maybe, she isn’t as terrible as Hyunjin originally thought.

sailorplutos
hi everyone !!! this fic has had way more feedback than i originally expected, and it makes me really happy. i already had this in mind, but i'd like to ask for your opinion first—would anyone be interested in a second chapter told from heejin's point of view?

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Tzuunaa #1
Chapter 1: Omgggg sooo goood this is soo deym good
colonel_corn #2
Chapter 1: So gooood!
satan05_ #3
Chapter 1: this is my third time reading this masterpiece :)))))) thanks so much for writing it. id love to know Heejin's pov too
MyouiHiraiDorkytae
#4
Chapter 1: Yes! Heejin’s POV would be interesting to read. Thank you for the heartwarming story you wrote, authornim.
joguri_cheek
#5
I don’t think I’ve written a review of this 2jin writing yet which I’m surprised about because this is one of my fav 2jin short story. First I loved how they kind of had a rivalry going on in Hyunjin’s point of view but Heejin just wanted to be friends because I could totally see it happening in real life lmao. Second I love the character development of Hyunjin’s relationship with Heejin how she started seeing what Heejin was really like and not her preconceived thoughts of what Heejin is. It was also heartwarming to see Heejin helping Hyunjin recover and helping her practice soccer/football again. Great work!
LittlePanduh
#6
Chapter 1: I am binge reading some Loona fics and I’m glad I got to read yours! I really like the pace of this story. I enjoy the connection 2jin has in this story as it makes their history more interesting. I also really enjoyed Hyunjin’s breakdown when she realized she likes Heejin. It’s so relatable. The last coffee shop scene was such a roller coaster. When Heejin didn’t reply, I was like silently screaming in my room and couldn’t function for a solid five minutes. My heart was racing too! That’s super cool that you’re able to do that as an author!
Did you end up writing a second chapter? I am still curious as to why Heejin checked on Hyunjin in the hospital. I don’t want to think too deeply about her letting Hyunjin win the race, but maybe that’s just it?
I look forward to other fics!
dimsumJon
#7
Chapter 1: I love this! It was really sweet and touching!
ImMina-nim
#8
Chapter 1: Yessss please!!! I need Heejin's POV Duuude I LOVE this ff!
Applelion #9
Chapter 1: Yes yes yes yes, please write another chapter from Heejin’s point of view!!!
P0rtM4n
#10
Chapter 1: Really, I love your story! I read again, it’s fantastic, when I need sweetnesses in my life, I only need read this story. After that, I loved a lot 2Jin