Amour

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''It would feel normal, it would feel familiar, but all Dahyun can think about is the girl with the brown eyes, and that smile that is only real enough to be destructive, and she starts to wonder if she'll ever really feel normal again.''

{Church girl Dahyun and somewhat church girl Sana? Please read, and please enjoy.}

Foreword

This fic will include portrayals of religion that some may find uncomfortable. Just a disclaimer. If you're uncomfortable with that, please read no further. 

(I understand that this isn't everyone's thing! I will try and be as respectful as possible)

Pt. 0 is intentionally short, and following parts will be longer :).

 

Please enjoy

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buddy_molly #1
Chapter 2: Man, this just keeps getting better and better. I love how you showed Dahyun's inner turmoil and her inexplicable attraction towards Sana and how magnetic you made your Sana. The way you described Sana's voice through Dahyun was just WOW. I love where this is going. Bravo so far!
buddy_molly #2
Chapter 1: Oh, this part already owns me. You write well, beautifully with a dash of humor that wins me over. You don't need to worry about the chapter being short because I think the quality shines through despite the quantity. Your style here just has that sort of impact. Kudos!
ohmymyoui 1436 streak #3
Chapter 2: Hearing every little thought that Dahyun has is so informative, especially the fact that every little thing that Sana does affects her. I think that Dahyun will find out something about Sana that will completely flip her preconceived notions about Sana right on its head, which might even change her own beliefs.

The characters and the world here are very well-established. Their personalities, character traits, and the world that feels very lived-in makes for a compelling and immersive story! The way you've written this story keeps me so invested that I'm already imagining all the possible story hooks and opportunities for character development, something that not many stories can do to me. I absolutely can't wait to find out more about these two, keep up the good work!
Samkam #4
Chapter 2: Incredibly well written!!! I’m hooked already.
iCameFromTheStars #5
Chapter 2: OMG OMG OMG OMG I really love this story=! <3 I've been waiting for a churchau all my life!
Twiceflexible #6
Chapter 2: the writing is on point. this satisfactory level of narration is so good! please do continue because i am currently experiencing like sana hahaha well i have been to church off and on but when i transferred to another country, i just stopped going for a year and few months already
Tokwa2x #7
Chapter 1: I came back to reread but it's missing. Something is missing. Or I just dreamed about this got updated since I just woke up. I'm confused. what happened?
ohmymyoui 1436 streak #8
Chapter 1: I can tell that this will be incredibly well written just from the first chapter! It'll be interesting to see what the conflict of the story will be, perhaps a religious reason that separates them or maybe time/distance when they go back to college? I'll definitely be keeping up with this one.
Samkam #9
Chapter 1: This is amazing!!!!!
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