Chapter 1: This is such a soft story. I really like the flow of the story as well as the humour in it. It's really nice to see Byul and Yongsun noticing and knowing the smallest things about each other. I like this part: 'She asks, but she's already unconsciously interlacing their fingers.' and also how they don't let go of each other's hands. So soft~ Wheein's message to Byul right after that scene is gold! I really enjoyed the conversation between Byul and Wheein, about feeling the pictures that Byul took. It's just so amazing that even Wheein could really feel the final photo Byul showed her. 'Bursts of Emotion' using photos of Yongsun is really fitting if Wheein reacted that way. And then we got to see Hyejin with Yongsun and how Yongsun got insecure knowing Wheein's with Byul. It's the funniest thing to see how things went down when it came to Wheein and Hyejin ahahah and then Byul said 'That's all the beans', then immediately telling Wheein about it, and also Wheein's message to Yongsun - that just cracked me up! I like this line: 'Byulyi's ecstatic expression brushes the residual laziness off of Yongsun's bones.' Ah, I also love how Yongsun felt the burst of emotion too. That line Yongsun said about how now everyone knows how much she loves Byul made me smile. Love the gentle atmosphere in the Wheesa scene at the end. Enjoyed reading this! Thank you for this wonderful story. :)
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