The Return

Mr. Sunshine: Dong Mae's Story

Chapter 4  The Return

1892

The crowd parted silently.

The tall, lean man in the scarlet kimono, and the black-clad men, with their empty eyes and their gleaming samurai swords, filing silently behind him, had never appeared  in this part of town before.

The crowd fell back as they passed, and then surged forward in excitement, whispering among themselves. 

The strangers walked on, and the townsfolk flocked behind them, close on their heels, but not too close, because one could never be sure what these strangers might do.

He saw them first before they saw him.

The huge woman with the narrow beady eyes, and her two companions, sitting on their heels, the queens of their humble turf, in the exact same spot they had occupied all those years ago.

Then they had been silent.

He remembered their eyes, unblinking, like hawks.

He remembered the fear that had paralysed him, the feeling of dread that the sight of these women had evoked in him.

They were almost as he remembered, but older, greyer, frailer.

But unlike that day ten years ago, today they were not silent;  instead, they were noisy, merry, rocking on their heels, slapping their knees in mirth, their cheeks red and flushed from the chatter and the good company of old friends.

Rage swelled in him, and there was a pounding in his head.

He stepped forward.

The women turned and stared up at him.

And this time, unlike that day long ago, he saw something flicker in their eyes.

Fear.

Fear of him.

"I have come for my payment. I have come to collect it today."

"Payment? What payment?" The big woman spoke, while the other two stared at him with confusion in their eyes . "But we do not owe you any money, sir."

"The money that you owed my father, the butcher, and my mother, the butcher's wife."

Light dawned in their eyes. And a rising fear.

"The boy...the butcher's son...you are him."

"Indeed I am," he bowed mockingly. "And I am here today, as I said, to collect my payment."

"We will pay you," the huge woman rummaged desperately, frantically through her clothes, and produced a huge, overflowing pile of coins in her trembling hands. "Take them, take them all. And if they are not enough, we will pay you more, anything you want."

"You do not understand," he said gently, almost kindly. "I have come for my payment. In blood."

With one swift movement, he swung his sword at her two companions.

The two women fell to the ground, dead, one with slit, the other with her belly split open.

He turned to the huge woman.

She fell at his feet, grovelling, clutching at his feet, "Please, sir, be merciful, please, sir, do not kill me."

"I am sorry," she snivelled, grovelling, rubbing her palms together, begging, "I am sorry for everything."

He pondered for a while, studying her, tugging at the stubble on his chin, rubbing his palm over the coarse bristles, as the woman wailed, and moaned, and begged him to spare her life.

"No, I will not kill you. I will spare your life."

She sagged in relief.

"But you have to pay for what you did to my father and my mother. It is only right that you pay."

He nodded at the men.

Two of them grabbed her, one on each side, and hoisted her high, so that she was facing him, both her feet spread wide apart and stretched out straight.

He raised the sword high in his hand. The blade quivered, catching fire in the sun.

He brought it down.

The blade slit smoothly through flesh and bone, slicing off her ankle neatly, precisely.

Her left foot lay on the ground like a broken toy.

She screamed in agony, blood gurgling and spluttering from the grotesque stump.

He swung the sword again at the other ankle.

Her right foot rolled to a stop within a hair's breadth of the dismembered left foot.

He bent slightly, and wiped his sword carefully on the woman writhing on the ground.

"You will from henceforth be a beggar, condemned to crawl on your knees for the rest of your miserable life, like a dog."

"You will live on the streets for the rest of your life." 

"That is how you will live," he spoke softly, almost sadly. "That is how you will live, the rest of your life."

He turned to the townsfolk, slipping his sword into its scabbard. 

They sank back in fear.

"Know me, and know me well; I am Dong Mae, the son of a butcher. Unlike my father, I am not afraid to tell the world who I am. Unlike my father, I am not afraid to cut anyone, and everyone, who crosses me."

"Tell everyone, spread the news near and far, that I have returned."

"The butcher's son has returned."

He turned to his men.

"Burn down this wretched creature's house. Burn it to the ground."

"Burn it, and make her watch it burn."

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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WonHakWoon
#1
Okay, so I really need to find a moment to read this because this story has to fill in a gap now that the Drama came to an end
WonHakWoon
#2
I really gotta find a moment to read this story
Hurinturin #3
Chapter 1: The way you have shaped up this chapter makes me wish that you were the scriptwriter and this was Dong mae's story...but wishing will get me nowhere especially after that heartbreaking finale....So, i shall just sit back and read this one
KarliCM #4
Chapter 28: I cant even begin like I’m so depressed and I dunno just plain sad this finale was to much I wanted Hina and Ding Mae at least to enjoy a lil bit but nooo both death like a horrible death thank you for updating
KarliCM #5
Chapter 25: I love you so much for writing this! It’s amazing how you portrayed dong Mae I adored it and I hope love for him and Hina at the end of the drama even if it can’t be
sallybrown #6
Chapter 16: Thank you so much for writing this fic! It's amazing *___*
CantabileCross
#7
Chapter 18: I’m sobbing can I say I love you

This is beautiful. This is exactly what I needed, Dongmae characterized by the rawest epithets, exotic and deeply sheathed in all his magnificent tragedy. I love how you’ve captured the finer details (e.g. Dongmae’s “strong aversion” to meats, Dongmae intimately tracing out the characters in Aeshin’s glorified shopping list, Dongmae’s self-consciousness about how Aeshin’s “I hope you live these moments” is just hopelessly clutching at straws, removing half the guards as a favor to Hina) of his character. A poor, poor fool indeed.

Your Hina is so lovely! She’s eccentrically vulnerable and pure, which imo is actually how she genuinely is, beneath her etiquette and clever tongue and feigned elegances and dignity—a cute squishy mochi—and this side of her is exclusive to Dongmae! Just like how Dongmae’s soft & sweet side is exclusive to um...every major character except Aeshin

“It is better to have loved than never to have loved at all.”

That’s the most fitting aphorism you can give to Dongmae and I have to say this again in the creepiest way possible: I ing love you. Really, though, this is such a pleasant (in the most uncomfortable, heart-rending way) read.

(Also your Eugene is amusingly cute and endearing, which is a little hard for me to digest from the drama as I keep conflating the character with the actor whom I’m pretty much an anti-fan of)

lastly, shoutout to best bros ever Yujo and Heeseong

P.S. - I’m a little behind on the show (I’m around ep 16, I don’t dare watch ahead bc I’m viewing with a friend) but one day Hotarúwù will get more screentime and I will be satisfied
WonHakWoon
#8
Aigoooo, I never knew there were stories of Mr. Sunshine on AFF. I will subscribe to this <3 <3
dizzylizzy21 #9
Chapter 3: love the way u so poignantly captured DM's emotions
dizzylizzy21 #10
Chapter 2: Tx for connecting the dots. I didnt understan