drizzle

to the light that shines through the window:
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2 January 2014

 

Jihyo stares at the ceiling, etching the striped pattern of streetlights through the blinds. It’s quiet, not really, but she’s already accustomed to the not so light snoring that filled the room.

 

A loud crash and a series of high-pitched yelps sharply cuts through the silence, and Jihyo is even more jolted to reality than possible. Her heart palpitations grow faster and everything seems louder and colder, goosebumps creeping up her arms as the low voice of a man begins shouting in a rush of Japanese.

 

She quickly glances across the room, thankful that the rest are heavy sleepers, as well as tired out by their burst of excitement when meeting Mina. At the thought of her newest roommate, Jihyo immediately looks to the side, and is surprised to see the pair of almost glowing eyes in the dark corner. 

 

“Don’t worry, that’s just my dad.”

 

Jihyo almost falls off the mattress in shock upon hearing the almost whisper of Mina. But with another distant loud thud coming from the lobby, the light shining through the window betrays Mina, and her indifferent attitude shatters in the form of watery eyes.

 

Unknowingly, Jihyo has already slid off the hospital bed, only noticing that she’s heading over when the chill from the floor touches her toes. 

 

The sound of wheezing hurries her as she slips to Mina’s bed, and maybe it’s because she has always taken care of everyone else, or maybe it’s because she herself cries way too often, but her arms naturally melt

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SpoKen-Youth
please celebrate my achievement of posting a new chapter within three days! but yes i hope you enjoy it even though all i write is just real sad emo stuff.
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juunji
#1
Chapter 5: Absolutely love the way you wrote this! I didn’t think I can get much out of this since the word count was so low, but despite that, you managed to make me grin and small at the smallest little thing in it. I wish I can write as well as you do.
ohmymyoui
1436 streak #2
Chapter 5: The melancholic feeling of this chapter was well done. I especially liked the lines about her precious, brave, beautiful, kind heart.
ohmymyoui
1436 streak #3
Chapter 4: I really missed this story! Your writing always paints such a vivid scene. Thank you for updating again.
ohmymyoui
1436 streak #4
Chapter 3: They're so sweet! I'm glad to see an update and I hope to see them grow together.
ohmymyoui
1436 streak #5
Chapter 2: All of the characters feel very fleshed out, you did a good job showing their backstories and their personalities through their habits and Jihyo's experiences with them.
ohmymyoui
1436 streak #6
Chapter 1: It's going to be interesting to see how this story develops. I liked the way it starts off with her first time at this place, it helps to put into perspective what she's been through. I'm already quite enjoying your writing!
ImMina-nim
#7
Chapter 2: Really good. I like it
ImMina-nim
#8
Chapter 1: Interesting beginning, continue it please~~~