Chapter 5: Absolutely love the way you wrote this! I didn’t think I can get much out of this since the word count was so low, but despite that, you managed to make me grin and small at the smallest little thing in it. I wish I can write as well as you do.

Chapter 5: The melancholic feeling of this chapter was well done. I especially liked the lines about her precious, brave, beautiful, kind heart.

Chapter 4: I really missed this story! Your writing always paints such a vivid scene. Thank you for updating again.

Chapter 3: They're so sweet! I'm glad to see an update and I hope to see them grow together.

Chapter 2: All of the characters feel very fleshed out, you did a good job showing their backstories and their personalities through their habits and Jihyo's experiences with them.

Chapter 1: It's going to be interesting to see how this story develops. I liked the way it starts off with her first time at this place, it helps to put into perspective what she's been through. I'm already quite enjoying your writing!

Chapter 2: Really good. I like it

Chapter 1: Interesting beginning, continue it please~~~