Chapter 1: Wow, this is so beautiful! And there's so much content... Really, I love it, it's so rare to find FFs with so long chapters! I warn you, the comment might get long...

5th August: I love your descriptions there! It's so beautiful and it's so easy to imagine the scenery and the dancing people and their first meeting. It's also really funny how Jun starts to hit on Minghao right away!

5th September: For a moment, I really thought you were gonna have Jun being the one who got attacked... I'm so glad it was Seokmin instead and that it led to such a beautiful friendship! It's also really cool to see Minghao fight back and how bitter he gets over the reason for the fight, not to forget how worried Jun was.

18th September: A resident ninja!!! I love that term! It's also so cool to see how Minghao gets along so well with Jisoo and Seungcheol and that a new friendship is forming right there as well. I hope we'll hear more of Jisoo and Seungcheol in the future, too, they seem to be good for Minghao!

5th October: I'm glad Minghao decided to just move in with Seokmin, he seems to have enough space there anyways! And he's better off with Minghao. It's so cool that Minghao commented on Jun's driving again, though I do feel sorry for both of them when they see the grafitti, yet both of their reactions are also really understandable, I think. I feel so sorry for Minghao to have been fighting all his life and then it still doesn't end in South Korea just because he stood up for Seokmin and his neighbors blame him because of it while Jun doesn't understand the entire meaning behind it...

16th October: Minghao hiding in his room to 'study' is totally relatable! I'm glad Jun attempted to take a first step to talk to him right there.

17th October: I'm so glad for the talk Minghao had with Jeonghan here! It was definitely necessary and I think Jeonghan already understood at that point (or maybe at the latest at that point?) how screwed up things are. It seems like he knows what Jun feels for Minghao, or maybe I'm just reading stuff into that that's not even there...

28th October: Mingyu is great! And his plan to change Jun's mind on Minghao is even better!!

31st October: It's so good to see that Mingyu doesn't let Minghao jump at the first chance he gets to talk to Jun but that Jun actually has to wait to talk to Minghao, but it's also good to see that they do have their important talk right there. Jun seems to understand so many things right on that day... I actually feel a little sorry for him that he's still with Jeonghan even though he seems to realize now that he could also be with Minghao and I'm really curious to see how it all plays out! I also love the idea with the paint marking special days, it's so cool! And at this point, I feel sorry for Jeonghan that he's the one who seems to be really into the relationship with Jun while Jun is having none of that because of his feelings for a certain other person...

1st November: This scene is short but super cute! Somehow I'm not even surprised that they fell asleep together on the sofa! :D And the discription about the way Jun looks is really sweet and heartwarming! I also just so happen to love that hair on Jun...

7th November: Even though Minghao had different plans for that day (and I guess it would have been nice for him to skype with his parents) I'm glad that he didn't spend his birthday on his own even though it seems like Jun didn't even know that it was Minghao's birthday. I feel sorry for Mingyu and can understand his anger, but I'm glad he came over on Minghao's birthday and even brought him a present. I'm really curious to see how things play out between Jun and Minghao from this point onwards, it's really promising!!!

To sum it up: This first chapter was already so well written that it leaves me longing for more and I can't wait for you to update. Thank you very much for sharing this beautiful story with us!