How to leave useful comments

Open Writing Club (Writing Week!)
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Since the perk of this club is receiving feedback, you have to do your part by leaving good feedback for others. Somethings to include in a comment to make sure your leaving the writer useful feedback include:

 

A few things you enjoyed about the story. 

Ex. "I like how you described these certain/particular things because of these reasons."

"The characterization of this person was really good/interesting/unique etc because..."

"I thought this part of the story was really good/cute/fun/interesting because of these reasons."

 

A few things you think could have been better. 

Ex. "The way you described this thing, it was confusing/I couldn't picture it well because.../seemed awkward because..."

"I couldn't really picture/understand why this character did this thing because it didn't seem rational/there was no foreshadowing/it didn't add much to the story/etc."

"I thought this part of the story was kind of weak/nothing really happened/it wasn't very useful to the plot/we didn't learn or see anything new/etc."

 

Just make sure to include a few things, or at least one thing you did like/that the author did well as well as a few things, or at least one thing you didn't care for/that the author could improve on. That way the author knows that at least they did something right and they feel confident and a bit satisfied with their story, but they also see a flaw from someone else's point

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Jan. 21, 2021 // The Open Writing Club is back baby! Let's start fresh and writing some one-shots and review everyone else's works :)

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DGNA_Forever
#1
I had forgotten all about this! Is it still a thing?
Lovexiu16 #2
Chapter 9: It might be a bit late but, here my story for this prompt.

https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1472819/1/daniel-xiumin
Lovexiu16 #3
Chapter 9: I’m nervous but this is so exciting!!
I get to writing!
Astrild
#4
Hope it's not too late!

I'm submitting an entry to Week 1's prompt -- https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1350076

Thanks so much :D
phippi92 #5
I know it's super late, but here it is.
W-2 Submission: Viva La Vida https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1333671/6
Also, is this going to continue?
mikimika101
#6
Is there going to be a week 3?
MVPLocket
#7
jfg i hope im not too late. I either write stories in a matter of 2 days or less, or take 856537 years to write-- Here's my entry for week2
https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1339025/two-princes-exo-jongdae-taochen-chentao-royaltyau-ztao
Blu3Wind
#8
Chapter 8: Oh no! I forgot to submit for week 2!!! The story fits the prompt >.<
upgrader
#9
Hope it's not too late but here's my entry for week 2!!!
https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1337084/