Thorny tongue

Aimless

It was  his tongue who lured his friends

It was his speech who captured them and read

The tongue that create blossoms and sweets

and sometimes pageant his wits

The tongue that threw him at the bottom of the pit

 He realized that this tongue was always open

open to criticize, to opinionate, to praise

to hurt, to makes someone's day or rain on their parade

Then he closed this tongue

They were happy for a while now

No more vexatious tongue that surrounds

but soon longing conceived

they want that tongue that once around

but its late now he already realized

they were fragile, who always lies

its gone now. it grew thorns

bump, chunks and horns

hes toungless now.

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Chiasmuseus
I am sorry for incorrect grammar (english is not my first language), typos and everything please bear with me. I will do love to read your comments, suggestions (on topics) and recommendations. I am writing these just because i dont know lol hence the name aimless xo

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AminahKarima #1
Chapter 8: Hi. I thought I was the only one feeling like this. I don't want to hear people saying "you can get through this" or "you deserve this" too. Those doesnt help me. Well, I'm writing this not because I could help you, but because I think we are experiencing the same problem. I don't know how to solve this, heck, I actually think I need help too lol. Let's just hope it will get better