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ㅤㅤLIVENLIE : THE BAND [RECRUITING MEMBERS]A FALL FROM GRACE
hello fellas here's the review page. character name, stage name, band position, and status are along the top ! title of the review section is a phrase that fits your character, and the icon is linked to the app !
once your app is accepted, the phrase will be linked to a drabble for your character !
Here's the rundown of the status titles :
AUDITIONING is when your app is currently under review !
CONSIDERING is when your app is accepted.
RECRUITED is when your app is chosen.
CUT is when your app is rejected. this means there are too many errors and you should apply again !
reviews won't typically be too long as the app is pretty freeform, but i will touch on things that i think are of importance.
once your app is accepted, the phrase will be linked to a drabble for your character !
Here's the rundown of the status titles :
AUDITIONING is when your app is currently under review !
CONSIDERING is when your app is accepted.
RECRUITED is when your app is chosen.
CUT is when your app is rejected. this means there are too many errors and you should apply again !
reviews won't typically be too long as the app is pretty freeform, but i will touch on things that i think are of importance.
hello kishibe !!! thank u for applying so quickly. overall, allison's app is solid ! here's just some various thoughts i had on her :)
+ i think a robotic perfectionist is someone that fits the overall vibe of livenlie .. and yet it's a character type that i never really considered when i first envisioned the plot hh
+ i think allison is interesting in her motions. her motive for joining is something i would want to write hh
+ this whole app made me self-conscious about my chapped lips ...
+ i feel as though i understand allison on a surface level, but i feel as though i don't quite know her yet. i could definitely write her as she is, but i feel like i don't quite understand who she is to the best of my ability ...
+ her quotes are niceu .. i dig her deadpan(nedness???? hmm)
nothing is glaringly wrong with your app so you are accepted my friend !! i would like just a bit more of a glimpse into allison on a deeper level but it's not something you gotta do heh heh. im workin on your drabble tho !! pls be patient with me !
+ i think a robotic perfectionist is someone that fits the overall vibe of livenlie .. and yet it's a character type that i never really considered when i first envisioned the plot hh
+ i think allison is interesting in her motions. her motive for joining is something i would want to write hh
+ this whole app made me self-conscious about my chapped lips ...
+ i feel as though i understand allison on a surface level, but i feel as though i don't quite know her yet. i could definitely write her as she is, but i feel like i don't quite understand who she is to the best of my ability ...
+ her quotes are niceu .. i dig her deadpan(nedness???? hmm)
nothing is glaringly wrong with your app so you are accepted my friend !! i would like just a bit more of a glimpse into allison on a deeper level but it's not something you gotta do heh heh. im workin on your drabble tho !! pls be patient with me !
hey again moonbok !! i'm coming to finally review your app hh ;;; mason is a great, cohesive character and i love how well he fits the vibe of l&l !!
+ what i like about mason is his juxtaposition with edison. i like how they would balance each other out and still contrast even after 2023
+ mason also has a very realistic reaction livenlie's rise to fame ... i think he suits the tone of the plot very very well.
+ "guess he'll just have to deal with all the dog jokes. this is fine."
+ mason's vibes are just ... so damn good for this fic
+ i think mason's choice of picking the guitar more than likely because of a subconscious decision to shine in contrast to edison's decision to play bass because no one else chooses it ... i think it says a lot about both of them.
overall !!! i really really enjoyed this app. i think your musings added the cherry on top for me to truly understand mason and i think he works excellently as a sibling to edison. thank you so much for applying !! your drabble is also coming hhh ;;;;;
+ what i like about mason is his juxtaposition with edison. i like how they would balance each other out and still contrast even after 2023
+ mason also has a very realistic reaction livenlie's rise to fame ... i think he suits the tone of the plot very very well.
+ "guess he'll just have to deal with all the dog jokes. this is fine."
+ mason's vibes are just ... so damn good for this fic
+ i think mason's choice of picking the guitar more than likely because of a subconscious decision to shine in contrast to edison's decision to play bass because no one else chooses it ... i think it says a lot about both of them.
overall !!! i really really enjoyed this app. i think your musings added the cherry on top for me to truly understand mason and i think he works excellently as a sibling to edison. thank you so much for applying !! your drabble is also coming hhh ;;;;;
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hello peakachu !! i love your username by the way ,,, so cute heh heh .. in any case, i enjoyed reading about rose ! she was very different from the expected applications i had imagined and it was a pleasant surprise.
+ i think that rose is someone who fits the vibe of the Band Aesthetique and i was actually a lil disappointed at first to hear that she was just the manager instead of the keyboardist
+ however, with that, i really like entertaining the relationship between her and music in the context of her outsider position for l&l
+ i think that her end to her piano career is a bit melodramatic ,,, but it's not something that i'll completely dismiss ,, i would like maybe her taking legal action against her attackers perhaps ? or it being an ongoing trouble throughout her childhood ? it seems a bit extreme for nothing to happen to the culprits over a pretty major offense...
+ her and edison are cute to think about ,, they're like-minded individuals.
thanks again for applying ! overall, rose is accepted, but i would like to maybe add in some more details concerning the Accident to make it a little more ... realistic ? but it's not enough to hinder me from accepting your app ! i will be working on your drabble hh,,,
+ i think that rose is someone who fits the vibe of the Band Aesthetique and i was actually a lil disappointed at first to hear that she was just the manager instead of the keyboardist
+ however, with that, i really like entertaining the relationship between her and music in the context of her outsider position for l&l
+ i think that her end to her piano career is a bit melodramatic ,,, but it's not something that i'll completely dismiss ,, i would like maybe her taking legal action against her attackers perhaps ? or it being an ongoing trouble throughout her childhood ? it seems a bit extreme for nothing to happen to the culprits over a pretty major offense...
+ her and edison are cute to think about ,, they're like-minded individuals.
thanks again for applying ! overall, rose is accepted, but i would like to maybe add in some more details concerning the Accident to make it a little more ... realistic ? but it's not enough to hinder me from accepting your app ! i will be working on your drabble hh,,,
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hi yakults !! thank you so much for applying ! im sorry this has taken me a bit to put up,,, i had some stuff keepin me busy heh heh.
+ this app is written so damn well... im not worthy.
+ i think that wynn has some really interesting character aspects to her that would be fun to explore within the context of livenlie
+ wynn is just the right amount of unhinged that i really can get behind this concept !!
+ her vibes are so good for livenlie i cannot even begin to gush enough about the vibes i got while reading her app
+ overall, all is great !!
wynn is a pretty kickass character so she's accepted ! i will be working on your drabble i swear ...
+ this app is written so damn well... im not worthy.
+ i think that wynn has some really interesting character aspects to her that would be fun to explore within the context of livenlie
+ wynn is just the right amount of unhinged that i really can get behind this concept !!
+ her vibes are so good for livenlie i cannot even begin to gush enough about the vibes i got while reading her app
+ overall, all is great !!
wynn is a pretty kickass character so she's accepted ! i will be working on your drabble i swear ...
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