Teaser Three }

PRINCES AMONG THIEVES } Chapter Updated


Teaser Three


... the noose was ready, and the on lookers braced themselves ...

A brisk wind whistled through the crowd, causing scarves to be tightened and jackets pulled snug around the awaiting spectators. It was not as often as one would think, that a hanging was so very public. They were events of great entertainment for the common folk, but they were usually held in the palace courtyard, were the nobility and certain citizens who lived in the upper town could manage to attend. This time was different of course. The unlucky bastard about to loose their life was none other then a pirate. Which meant, by the decree of Queen Illia, they would be hanged in the town square of the county’s capital, Rostrone. Surrounded by streets packed full of people, faces gaunt and numb from the cold.


It was dead silent, allowing the crackle of torches to be heard, it was as if time had slowed by the thumping of drums. Even the snow appeared as though to loiter on its decent to the ground. Puffs of frosted breath coasting around the square. The noose was ready, and the on lookers braced themselves as the pirate was pulled up the stairs, and shoved toward the middle of the platform. A sigh and series of unfortunate whispers echoed briefly as the bag was pulled off her head. She was gnarled, but stunning none the less, even with once sun kissed skin pale. She shifted in her leather boots, smirking at the on lookers. The men whose eyes roamed her body, and the women who looked away abashedly. Her shirt was far too thin and low cut for the severe weather of Wintanberg, especially during Frosttide.


The banging of a cane silenced the crowds again, as a middle aged man in a smooth velvet dress coat cleared his throat, proceeding to read The Accused her charges. “This woman, Beatrix Baudelaire, is accused of murder, theft, and crimes against her majesty. But above all, piracy!” The man announced, his first clenching the handle of his cane when Beatrix simply chuckled. “Piracy is a most brutal and inhuman crime! Those who offend the laws of our Queen, as well as the laws of nature, will find their reckoning!”


A figure slipped through the crowd, their caller turned up and hood pulled low over their face. He wasn’t so accustomed to this chilling weather, and would be more then happy to return to the tropics once business was handled here. As the sentencing continued to drag on, the hooded figure turned down into an alley and entered a small inn. Heading passed those faces peering through windows, trying to get a glimpse while keeping warm. He mounted the staircase, and three levels up he found the room he had claimed the night before. The hooded man strode slowly toward the balcony, opening the frosted windows, before crouching between the railings. He began to fumble with the inside of his long thick coat.


“As it is by law, Beatrix Baudelaire is here by, sentenced to death!” The velvet coat man announced, as the executioner proceeded to position the noose around her slender neck. There was a pause as a Paladin began to recite a prayer from the sidelines.


In that moment, before the executioner had the chance to adjust his grip around the lever, a shot burst through the crisp air. Sparks descended from the inn’s balcony, as the hooded figure stood back up, reloading his rifle. The shot had disposed of the executioner, but now with the ramped crowd and the snooty velvet coat, there was still more work to be done.


“Unhand our Quartermaster or non o’ ya’r will make it home in one piece!” Exclaimed a long bearded man from the crowd, flinging off his coat, and pulling out his blunderbuss. Four others followed soon after, two making their way to set fire to a nearby stack of barrels. The bigger a distraction, the easier it would be to get Beatrix out safely.


“This is madness! You’ll all be hanged!” Cried out Velvet Coat, trying to reach the lever. However a well aimed shot penetrated his shoulder before he could get close to it, causing him to collapse on the platform.


A handsome man of Sharki decent hurried away from the burning barrels, pulling a dagger from his belt. He met Beatrix’s green eyes from the platform, and couldn’t help but smile at her knowing look. After all, he’d told her not to go through with her plan, but both of them knew she wasn’t gonna listen. So there had been an exchange of kisses but no goodbyes. They never said goodbye.


He mounted the platform, ready to cut her loose. “What? No I told ya so?” She chuckled, watching him closely.


“Nay, because ya already owe me two gold coins jaanam...” Avniel Shahar smirked, and leaned in for a kiss. “Now let’s get ya out of this so we can feel the sea beneath our feet again!” He pulled back from her lips, to reach up and begin cutting at the rope. But Velvet Coat began to stir on the ground, and before Avniel could make enough progress, his cane slashed against the lever and the floor fell beneath Beatrix’s feet.


Avniel gasped, trying to grab at her, keep her up. But the man was beginning to stand, and Captain Alcazar had lost his vantage point from the inn balcony, fighting off officers who had spotted him. “L-l-listen to me Av...LISTEN!..it’s in-n his c-coat, he to-ok it from m-me cell...” She forced out, despite the rope strangling her windpipe.


“Meri jaan...” He breathed out, cupping her face, still trying to keep Beatrix up. He looked behind her, down the streets toward the barracks, and saw the Queen’s army begin to mobilize. They were out of time.


“Go!” She insisted, and with one final kiss she lifted her legs to shove him back. This time she fell with more weight, and without Avniel to catch her. The snap was quick, and Avniel felt a displacement of his soul and body. The chaos around him blurred, trapped in that suspended state till he heard the whistle of Velvet Coat’s cane through the air.


He whirled his arm to grab it, and tore it out of the man’s hands. Avniel didn’t hesitate any longer, swiping the cane at his knees, so he fell hard on the platform. On top of the man now, Avniel pressed his blade against his throat, drawing the smallest ounce of blood. “Where is it? Ya honourless bilge rat!”


“What? I-I don’t have anything!” He insisted, but Avniel just pressed harder. “Aargh! F-fine! Left-t inner pocket...” He breathed, and Avniel shifted so his elbow held down the man’s chest, while his hands searched his coat. Then his finger tips felt the cold metal, and retrieved the ancient coin. It fell into the palm of his hand, Avniel’s thumb cascading over the weathered edges, the cracks, and the skull and cross bones etched into the centre.


Velvet Coat tried to struggle out of his grasp, calling at the approaching soldiers. Avniel quickly stored the coin in his own pocket, and drove his dagger through the man’s trachea. Blood spewed as his hand pulled back, and he turned, leaping from the platform. He’d let him choke on his own blood, a slow and gruesome death. The Queen’s army and her alliances would let pirates, free men of the sea, be strangled for public entertainment. This ponce didn’t deserve a quick death.


“We haven’t much time! More of the Queen’s lapdogs will be here. Best we clear out now!” Exclaimed Captain Alcazar, pulling himself over the railing, landing firmly on his feet bellow. He squeezed Avniel’s shoulder, looking back at Beatrix, still swaying from the rope. “I’m sorry Avniel, but we can’t risk stayin’ here much longer. Ya have it don’t ya?” The Boatswain looked up at his Captain and nodded. An expression of relief covered his face, but it was short lived. A sudden explosion shook the square. One of the barrels the crewman set ablaze was packed full of gun powder. That would draw even more attention to the square.


“Since news broke of the Kings’s illness, Wintanberg ‘as been on the hunt more then ever. They ’re lookin’ for any weaknesses we ‘ave.” The bearded pirate exclaimed as the crew hastened down the snowy streets, and dipped into a descending hill.


“Have the Ambassadors convened?” Avniel questioned, ducking at the echo of gun shots, this time from the Queen’s army.


“Aye! Means we need to get to work! The next King will ‘ave the most power!” His Captain answered, pulling the hood down to reveal a shaved head. They needed to disappear into the public, and find somewhere to lay low till they could leave the capital.


“Is that why we came here?” Avniel questioned, before skidding around a fallen townsman.


“O’ course! The Ninth Piece of Eight ‘as been in the Queen’s possession for decades!” The bearded pirate chimed in, bounding down an empty alley followed closely by Avniel and their Captain. The chaos continued further down the streets, followed by the army. Here they could rest for a moment.


“I mean for us to gain favour among the Ambassadors, by retrieving it.” Alcazar breathed heavily, leaning against a stone wall. He nodded at the coin Avniel pulled from his pocket.


“Hail-Hail the Pirate King, he who holds the Ninth Piece of Eight...” Avniel whispered the lyrics, his mind filling with wistful memories of smoke, rum, sour plum, and skin against skin. Beatrix loved sour plums.


“...Hail-Hail the Pirate King, he who rules the Winds and Tides.” Alcazar finished the verse, and a heavy silence fell over them.


Everything was about to change.
 

 

Author's Note

Hey! Finally posting the third teaser! This one I did the most editing and revisions on, so unsurprisingly it’s also the longest so far. It is for everyone to get a better idea of not only other pirate crews and their schemes, the plans of different kingdoms, but also a bit more pirate mythology overall. Also for those wondering, jaanam means beloved, and Meri jaan means my love/soul/life when in reference to a female. I hope you enjoy!

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Jewel_ELF
#1
Chapter 12: I'm rereading this and I dont know why but it's just hitting me that you use they/them for Yuni when she is being Sochun and I love it
BanaWarrior
#2
Chapter 12: I'm late with the comment, sorry! Sunday I was feeling like mush because I stayed up till 3 am playing board games with my friends :')

And the most curious thing happened when I read the chapter for the first time. The soundtrack lasted until the last word of the Author's Notes for me, but during the chapter itself I was always out of the right tempo hahahaha That being said, back to the chapter!

So first we have Zyanya! I don't know why but I got surprised to know that she's a huntress xD It was super cool to go through the jungle/forest with Zyanya, like we were part of the hunt too! But dude! I got worried when she crossed into Eastland territory! She must be hella strong to be able to run while carrying a DEER!
Zya's nervousness while meeting the Chief makes me wonder if she's the type to get into mischief often, thus why she thought she was in trouble haha And also, here I was thinking that "All-as-One, The Path we follow" for some reason made me remember of "Rejoice in the Ocean's Mother favour" and then! The map is about the Deep Domains!!!! WHAT!!?? Does the merpeople know that?? If they do, would that mean that the Westland tribes have some type of relation to the merpeople?? So many questions!! (besides, the fact it's hobgoblin's hide make it even more eerie) The "Deliver it, towards it's destiny." Made me think about that part in PotC where Tia Dalma is using shells to find something and I think she says "something something, a touch of destiny" xD Fitting, in my opinion.

Oh Pan is next! And our girl is definitely not having a good time :') She seems to have made a kind of friend tho, so I guess that's good? And I'm relieved that she learned quickly enough that being anonymous was the best for her. Oof, okay, no more friend, because they are being separated. All the girls feel like they are walking to their doom, but WE know that Piranha Isles is where Kazume will find Pan so, that's a ood thing! Even if she doesn't know that yet :p
(Also I must confess that I'm curious exactly how things went for Pan to be where she is now. Like, I know the palace was attacked, but, you know, I'm curious for the details too xD)

And now we turn a 180 because we are dropped into a super proper and refined afternoon tea. hahahaha I guess it says a lot that Euphemia still acts and portrays herself with such pose even when she's in the presence of someone she feels comfortable with. Also the "You want power, not just duty" promises us a hella of journey in the future! xD I guess Euphemia's future is one that I'm most curious about. And hey she has a crush! How cute!
The scene with the girls suddenly getting ready to look a picture perfect image reminds me of that similar scene in Pride and Prejudice xD hahahaha But heck, Sophronia is out for blood, figuratively. I feel some complex here. Also, I'm here thinking that what happened with Euphie is called "parentization" I think, when one of the children has to act as a parent for their siblings. And that's very sad and not very healthy.
OH HECK, IT'S THE MAP FROM THE TEASER!!! That sailor is sure lucky! If the map shows a part of Gelbodihr and then stops... I guess the rest would be Piranha Isles and... The Deep Domain again? I see that the pirates will have to fend off the Wintamberg navy :p I wonder what Laguna will think about so many people in her territory hahahaha

What I really like about this next part is that I start with so many questions (mostly 'what vendetta?? and why???") and by the end I have all my answers xD I'm also here internally screaming because THE SICARIUS AAAHHHHHHHHHHH I also was NOT expecting whatsoever to see Khufu and Meretites mentioned since they were the side characters of the side character (that also is mentioned! Hi Kahina!) The fact that Azure Moon seems so mysterious and dangerous, and remembering the plotlines for the crew, I have a pretty good guess who we are talking about here xD
And then we see the crew!!! I'm laughing at our dear crewman saying that "girls are bad luck on ships" when there is a whole Isla living with them for I don't know how long xD hahahahahahaha So it seems that from our bunch of rag-tag girls, Ziwei is the first to reach the crew! I also love how she didn't even had the chance to try to sell her lie LOL Tho with Haoxuan there, it was best that she didn't even tried. And of course Kazuma is distrustfull of new people xD Ziwei endeared herself to me simply by the fact that her introduction is a epic fail of her plans lol

Yuni, or should I say Sochun, seems like a real sweetheart! I think it also helps to separate Yuni from Sochun the neutral pronoum shows up. We know that by then the character of Sochun is up.
And now we have rag-tag girl number two! The new cabin boy! I have a feeling that Junkyu will appreciate not being the "lowest ranking one" anymore hahahahaha Sochun, I think just as a precaution, you should prepare for a lot of bossy guys ordering you around xD But I'm here thinking WHY do they need to go all the way to Spenia when apparently going back to the Piranha Isles is so important and they are super close already. I wonder who they will pick up on the way? Or on the way back xD

Now we have seen almost all the girls! And the adventure seems to have trully started! I'm excited for what's happening next!

P.S: Just a small note on a typo I saw, of "women" (plural) being used in place of "woman" (singular). Not anything major, but since the meaning is different, it could maybe confuse a distracted reader. :p
Jewel_ELF
#3
Chapter 1: Congrats on the job, those are hard to come by these days
BanaWarrior
#4
Chapter 1: :DDDDDDDDDDDD
YEYYYYYY
Good luck on your job and I'm excited for the next chapter!
stormatsea
#5
Chapter 11: THIS IS AMAZING!
Reading through this chapter I was like I love Undina then I was all like I love Anou! Slowly it just turned into I 'm going to love all of these characters and have resigned myself to my fate hahah XD
I loved all of this. Undina is so cute I just wanna squish her! Athan is also just the best bean I adore him (an ongoing trend haha). Also gotta love how chill she took just waking up with legs lol. I can't say I'd be all that chill about it myself. Calypso is amazing, and really went into that motherly role quickly.
Then comes Anou and her engagement party. Oh boy did that escalate, started out so normal and then Pavun had to come in and just be the worst. I was reading and was 100% like don't just stop at breaking his kneecaps keep going. Her relationship with her father is so heartwarming. He's such a good father only wanting the best for his daughter, but also knowing when to just stop and listen to what she wants to do and respecting that was just so heartwarming. Really catching me in the feels there.
This crew is a lot and I love it XD! Takuya just sitting there meditating like it's just the most natural thing in the world despite an actual storm coming had me laughing. Not to mention just how chill Nickhun is will all of it like, "yup this is my life now, nothing weird here" is just perfection. I love the constant back and forth relationship with Hugo and Theo. Theo really just knowing all of the buttons to push to get a reaction out of the other and just eternally amused with it all the while Hugo still adamantly sure that the thing he's looking for HAS to be in this chest of women's garments, and low and behold it definitely was NOT. The part about him having to remove a bonnet from his head made me snort out loud not gonna lie, and how he was not phased by it more interested in the mermaids tears. Though not that I can blame him I'm also hella curious haha. Kazuya's and Junkyu's relationship is great truly 10 outta 10. Also Isla is amazing and truly has made her place on the ship. I loved her talking back to Takuya like yes you go girl, you tell him XD
I can't wait for the next chapter and to meet all these new characters! I'm sure I'll end up loving them all as well! I also can't wait to see how they all end up together on this ship!
BanaWarrior
#6
Chapter 11: IT'S HEEEEERE!!!!!!!
First of all, I was like "Undinaaaa" lol I really loved to see her interactions with Laguna and they playing around (the bubbles sound and then the picked up song gave a whole immersive vibe on their chase!) and I'm here thinking that the mermaid princesses are probably the most carefree, or at least with those two haha. I had to laugh at the dinglehoper reference hahaha Athan is also so cute! He's all -grabby tentacles don't leave me behind- ugh, so cute! It was also pretty nice that Undina's last interaction with her sister was of support and encouragement, because she probably won't talk with them for a long time, now that she got legs :') Calypso is also great! Her levels of motherly reach almost grandma levels hahahaha And it was really cool of her to turn Athan so he could stay with Undina! (his little tail grabbing around Undina's wrist? I went "aaawwnnnn" in 0.1 seconds).

And then I got ANOTHER gift in the form of Anou!!!!!!!!!!!!! Say about an engagement that ends badly (tho we could say it ended well because it was broken in the end :p) Inaaya is such a romantic xD You can see that both Anou and Drishya don't put that much faith in love. Also, I have a feeling that the sister was in cahoots with Pavun, or he just went behind everyone. But dude!!!!! It got me some seconds to realize, but the only place he stopped by was next to the fossilized SNAKE! Tell about forewarning xD I'm really glad nothing really happened (as in, he tried but was unsuccessful) and I was "HELL YEAH JAYESH, BREAK HIS NOSE" lol But Sri Sumbhajee actually hit where it would hurt: the reputation. Through the whole thing it was so clear how much Anou's family loves her and it really warmed my heart. Jayesh is a great father and the part where Anou promised she would make him proud and cried I was "no, I WON'T cry TTwTT" But yeah :') And the urgent message, I wonder if that has any relation with the ship in the storm in the second teaser. And also, AGAIN, last words of love and support hitting my heart right in the middle :') But whatever happened, it must have been REALLY serious that Jayesh left Anou behind not even a full day after she almost got taken advantage of. (Unfortunatelly we know that things go bad ;-; )

And then we have the Nightingale creeeew!!!! It's the first time we were introduces to the whole crew, they were the midde of a heist with a time limit because of a hurricane and my brain constantly went "oh wait, I know this song in the background!!" so you can guess it was a lot at the same time xD It was super cool to see how they all work together (and in less or more obvious ways how they baby Junkyu lol) Of course that Takuya is the type to just MEDITATE before an impeding storm xD I had to laugh at Minhyuk's exasperation and Nichkhun's acceptance hahahah Kazuma lowkey-highkey convincind Ethan that Takuya's plan will work, Theo and Hugo bickering and all the other little interactions between the crew members really gives us a good broad view of their general relationship! I don't think many other crews would manage the feat they did, and I wonder what they need mermaid tears for. Also the bit with the floating piece of eight was super cool! This makes me realize that this bit in this chapter technically happened before the third teaser.

I still need to find my pace while reading and listening to the background music, because while I start in a good pace, with time I start to read faster becuse I'm afraid I will not finish the current part before the music changes and then I get out of step with the songs n.n' But I just need some practice and to stop being so anxious lol I'm also super curious to see how Yuni will join the crew, how things will go wrong for Euphemia and Panthea and what shanenigans will happen with Ziwei and Sophie! I'm also curious to see who will be the first of the "guests" to become part of the crew/to arrive in the Nightingale!
Jewel_ELF
#7
Chapter 1: I kinda totally forgot about this story, ngl, but life happens, we will wait for you if we have to but I'm glad your back
BanaWarrior
#8
Chapter 1: -excited noises- I'm pumped to see this going on! :D
BanaWarrior
#9
Chapter 1: -excited noises- I'm pumped to see this going on! :D