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... aye, tales there be plenty in this cursed place ...

 

 
 

 

 

“Pirates have taken control of the seas,
Cast out the darkness, crowned their king.
But when the king breaks the code, all will fall to their knees.
Chaos will rule, as thieves lose their honour, and the hymn of death begins to sing.
It won’t be the end, if a new brotherhood is formed, under princes among thieves,
Finally the new age will take wing.”

From the Predictions of Seer Jung Do

 

 


SEASONS

     


     

 


CALENDAR : year 1321 ED

Months: Gildrise, Frostwane, Greencrest, Silverfall, Floreal, Palesun, Highsun, Harvestsun, Gildfall, Mistcrest, Ashwane, Silverset
Weekdays: Marketday, Titheday, Weaverday, Hearthday, Feastday, Gildday, Graceday

 

 

THE NIGHTINGALE

Captain’s Cabin | Quartermaster’s Cabin | First Mate’s Cabin

 

Lower Decks | Gun Decks

 

Crew’s Quarters | Board Room & Treasury | Hold

 

 

COUNTRIES

 

Miyuseille
Race Name: Mixed (Anglian, Jiā)
Equivalent: Mixed (French, Japanese)
Languages: Flausfeti (french), Inoshi (japanese), Common Tongue (english)
Description: A coastal country historically disputed over by Wintanberg and the Jiā-Min clan, for its abundant resources. Citizens from both countries immigrated there to exert dominance, making a divided state by technicality. However over time the people found they had their own collective national identity, and fought to gain independence. They are an ethnically mixed society, and are ruled by a king who is a distant relative to the royal family of Wintanberg. They mostly rely on their fruit and fine arts exports.
Clothes: Regency Era with Japanese Adornment
Beliefs: Catharrow, Seriph Jade

 


Wintanberg
Race Name: Anglian
Equivalent: Belgian, Anglo-Saxon
Language: Flausfeti (french), Anglian (anglo-saxon), Common Tongue (english)
Description: A large northern country with a long history of imperialism, budding heads with Spenia many times over colonies, and possesses Sabkhlah in it’s sphere of influence. They used to have the land Miyuseille resides on, until decolonization. Since the disputes over Miyuseille they have been on rocky terms with Jiāyuán. Their society is heavily Anglian, however you may see minorities around Port areas. Their royal family is matriarchal, their High Queen turning 100 soon.
Clothes: Tudors Era with Emphases on Fur
Beliefs: Catharrow

 

Newhaven
Race Name: Anglian, Various
Equivalent: Port Royal
Language: Common Tongue (english), Various
Description: While it is a colony of Wintanberg, it is not just Anglian that live there. There are a number of natives, as well as slaves from Spenia and Usava, that occupy the colony. It’s trade is predominantly in local resources exchanged with goods from Wintanberg and other countries in alliance with them. Piracy is highly illegal here, and the hanging of pirates is almost a form of entertainment for the common folk. However pirates still like to storm its ports regardless. The upper class live in luxury, the lower classes in constant worry and destitute. The economy only booms for those with privilege.
Clothes: Baroque Era, Various
Beliefs: Catharrow, Various

 

Jiāyuán
Race Name: Jiā (7 different clans)
Equivalent: Vietnamese, Cambodian, Korean, Mongolian, Japanese, Chinese, and Indonesian
Language: Công (vietnamese), Yeung (khmer), Hwan (korean), La (mongolian), Inoshi (japanese), Rénlèi (mandarin), Sing (indonesian)
Description: There are 7 different clans within the country, all self governing. Jiā-Dan, Jiā-Dtang, Jiā-Hwan, Jiā-La, Jiā-Min, Jiā-Shu and Jiā-Sing. They have battles over land since there aren’t many set boarders. Each clan regulates peace with one another through royal marriages. They struggle with rouge crime since many low class thieves take to piracy for food and wealth for their families. The lowest classes are always treated like dirt, and restrained from benefits of foreign policy, so they take it upon themselves.
Clothes: Various
Beliefs: Seriph Jade

 

Prieçia
Race Name: Angliçian
Equivalent: Greek
Language: Prieçian (greek), Common Tongue (english)
Description: One of the oldest countries, however has continuously struggled with warding off intruders from apposing countries throughout history. They have a stable and constant amount of minerals and oils which they can use to trade with Wintanberg, in return for live stock. However their greatest foe has been Spenia who keep trying to invade them for their abundant space and arable land. Their people have been displaced in ancient times, and rely on faith to keep their homeland.
Clothes: Renaissance Era
Beliefs: Erianism

 

Tamaza
Race Name: Tamazian
Equivalent: Egyptian
Language: Tamazian (Egyptian)
Description: One of the longest and strongest civilizations in the world. Though relatively secluded, they do have consistent trade with Usava and Spenia their close neighbours. They don’t have a particularly big navy, but their military alliance with Usava is what keeps both kingdoms going. Fishing and music are what they are most well known for, as well as the beauty of their people. Men and women are seen as equal citizens, and women have many of the same rights as men. In fact many of their rulers are female, such as the current Queen Nephthys who took the throne not long after her father the previous Pharaoh died.
Clothes: Ancient Egyptian
Beliefs: Ouaphris

 

Gelboldihr
Race Name: Dwarves and Fauns, Halflings
Equivalent: Dwarves and Fauns (Narnia), Halflings (Dungeon & Dragons)
Language: Boldihr (khuzdul), Common Tongue (english)
Description: An ancient kingdom spanning from fishing ports to large mountains for mining, Gelboldihr is perfectly self sustaining and only gets involved in international trade and affaires because of free labour sent over from Jiāyuán and Spenia. The Dwarves are the ruling race, Halflings the offspring of human slaves and Dwarven lords that are often discriminated against. Fauns are a docile race, who dwell in the forest area in-between the ports and mountains, they’re scholarly and do much book keeping and regulating for the dwarves.
Clothes: Nordic Viking
Beliefs: Will of the Flame

 

Usava
Race Name: Usavian
Equivalent: Carthigian
Language: Savetsu (Punic)
Description: Relying heavily on their military power and strong national identity, Usava has been able to build itself into a strong empire, with a relatively significant navy. Their local economy mostly consists of trading, fishing being a strong resource. They’re alliance with Tamaza is very important to them, and they facilitate it through bartering of textiles, and even royal marriages. They openly do business with the pirate community, viewing them with respect.
Clothes: Ancient Carthigian
Beliefs: Erianism

 

Sabkhlah
Race Name: Sharki, Thari
Equivalent: Indian, Thai
Language: Sharki (hindi), Thari (thai), Common Tongue (english)
Description: It’s origins are not widely known due to its ancient history, however they have never had a strong military. It resides too secluded from most countries to attempt to over throw, but has huge mining potential. However Wintanberg’s imperial ambition gave them the upper hand and Sabkhlah is now under their sphere of influence. They have two distinct ethnicities, of which don’t often get along, so while they are cooperative mostly in politics, they live in different areas of villages. Crime is common among the lower class, and pirates find refuge among the middle classes, a sort of upper cut to Wintanberg.
Clothes: Mughal and Lopburi
Beliefs: Seriph Jade

 

Badlands
Race Name: Abantu, Goblins and Hobgoblins
Equivalent: Aztecs, Goblins and Hobgoblins (Pathfinder)
Language: Seucewun (indigenous dialects), Golock (goblin)
Description: Split into the Westlands and the Eastlands, it is two very different sides of the same coin. The Westlands are dominated by human tribes, historically enemies but now allies to fight off the threat that is the Eastlands and it’s inhabitants. Dark magic is common in the Eastlands, which is where the Abantu legend of how humans were turned into Hobgoblins originates. Abantu are some of the few humans known to be able to wield magic, given to them by their connection to nature, is found in their culture commonly, but never abused.
Clothes: Aztec
Beliefs: Kunasatou

 

Spenia
Race Name: Gente
Equivalent: Spanish
Language: Palabras (spanish), Common Tongue (english)
Description: They used to be small and weak like Prieçia however instead of relying on their faith to keep their home safe, they instead built up their military. Are known to be very ruthless and have a strong sense of patriotism. Spenia believes part of Prieçia belongs to them, so they have been sworn enemies for quiet some time. They sustain themselves through fishing and silk making, which is exported elsewhere, in return for minerals and plants to grow. If Wintanberg is the strongest, Spenia is a close second.
Clothes: Renaissance Era
Beliefs: Erianism, Catharrow

 

Piranha Isles
Race Name: Various
Equivalent: Tortuga, Nassau
Language: Common Tongue (english), Various
Description: A Pirate Port if you ever saw one. It used to be a Wintanberg outpost, but when the Pirate King came to power it was taken over as a Pirate strong hold, since very few would dare go near because it, as it is so close to Gelboldihr and the Badlands. The island was effectively destroyed, and so was rebuilt using parts of wrecked ships. Spells like fish, rum, and candle wax, but pleasant and inviting to all of The Brotherhood. It’s castle was build out of the old fort and lies at the top of the highest point, the island sustained by the Pirate crews coming and going with goods.
Clothes: Various
Beliefs: Various

 

Cadralia
Race Name: Merpeople
Equivalent: Atlantis
Language: Merlic, Common Tongue (english)
Description: The world of the Merpeople is different from that of those who dwell above, existing in various realms based on the different seas. The Cadral Sea is where the capital is, Cadralia, the hub of aquatic commerce and society. The royal family also lives here, and it’s the only place in the ocean where you’ll find so many species getting along no strings attached. It’s ancient, however the newer parts of Cadralia have been built from sandstone only a hundred years ago, in comparison to the millennia old structures. Because of this magic is strong, and why most trade is between magical goods. However the Merpeople hate Land-dwellers and therefore have limited trade beyond the Abantu and Dwarven peoples, and occasionally pirates.
Clothes: None, with Shell Adornments
Beliefs: Mother-of-All

 


RELIGIONS

 

Overview
Name: Catharrow
Type: Monotheism
Teaching: To avoid the dangers of selfishness and greed, one must learn to control destructive emotions.
Symbol: Sparrow with outspread wings
Clergy: Knights of Paladin
Place of Worship: Cathedral
Founder: Catherine the Sparrow
Rituals: Followers are known as Sparrows, and on Graceday it is customary for them to seek council with the Paladins of the clergy, and reflect on their emotions to continue to control them. Gatherings are held on Hearthday and Graceday, where followers enjoy song and enlightened poetry. Sparrow iconography is common, such as in art and in religious jewelry. All Catherine’s teachings are recorded in the book of Segena.

Nature of the Divine
Name(s): The Almighty
Legends: Catherine was saved from falling off of a cliff by a glowing white being, and was henceforth given divine knowledge. It’s believed this being was an embodied Spirit, minor deities that either guide you or lead you astray. There are Spirits of Burials and Necropolises, Spirits of Lost Souls and Wanderers, Spirits of Sea Nymphs and Wisps, and Spirits of Safe Passage and Guidance.

History
Though the origins of Catharrow aren’t exactly known, its largest population is in Wintanberg and subsequently their colonies, however never really caught on in Sabkhlah. It is said that Catherine’s followers were known as Sparrows, since she used to bread and care for the said bird. The Sparrows built a great Cathedral, establishing this religion as a real power, but the Cathedral was destroyed by an opposing religion. Some of her followers needed to take up arms in order to protect their beliefs, and became the Knights of Paladin, named for the man who lead them.

 

 

Overview
Name: Erianism
Type: Polytheism
Teaching: The world is plagued by violence and hatred, and the way to avoid this is to conform to ones’ role in society and be dedicatedly faithful.
Symbol: Circle with crossed olive branches
Clergy: Monks
Place of Worship: Landmark Alters
Founder: The Prophet
Rituals: Followers are known as Erianists, and follow strict faith. Monks are a constant part of daily life. Every Feastday there are celebrations and ritual offerings at designated Alters, as the people embrace the gods. Their symbol of faith can be found anywhere worship takes place, on Monk robes, and on royal military battle armour for blessing and protection.

Nature of the Divine
Name(s): Rosyn (Goddess of Agriculture and Land), Fumnos (God of Love), Avlena (Goddess of Hunting), Erian (Goddess of Fortune), Nabeus (God of Beginnings and Endings), Gipphine (Goddess of Marriage), Eione (God of War), Napysus (God of the Sea and Sailing), Iraura (Goddess of Beauty and Youth)
Legends: The world was made from the dismemberment of a god, and living creatures of all sorts came from the tears of his fellow gods, in order to fill his world. He was killed by the father, who was then cast out to a different spiritual dimension, now known as Downworld. The nine deities made their brother into a world, and watch over it. There is a secondary tier of deities known as Patrons Of Sin. Because they are the product of among the gods, so they are seen as the embodiments of the worst sins. They are believed to often come to earth in different forms and sleep with humans to make Demi-gods. There is Vimion the God of Pleasure, Andis the God of Envy, Isthys the Goddess of Jealousy, and Cora the Goddess of Hatred.

History
Originally it has ties with Ouaphris but enough time has passed to allow it to develop in its own ways, and is mostly practiced in Prieçia, Spenia, and Usava. It is considered one of the most ancient religions. Many are not aware it was first practiced in Usava, and developed since then and spread across continents.

 

Overview
Name: Ouaphris
Type: Polytheism
Teaching: The only way to defeat greed and hatred, is equality and rule of law. All are equal.
Symbol: Rope of Eternity around Staff
Clergy: High Priests and Priestesses
Place of Worship: Temple
Founder: Pharaoh Naahmed
Rituals: Followers are known as Acolytes of the Divine, as a symbol for their divine creation. Because this faith can be traced back to the oldest known Pharaoh, religion and politics are very close, and the royal family are looked at as divinely blessed. The symbol of Ouaphris is tattooed to the back of the neck of all High Priests and Priestesses, and can be found inscribed all across their Temples.

Nature of the Divine
Name(s): Alealamia (God of the Earth)
Legends: Unlike Erianism, their main focus of worship is the tenth god, therefore their temples are dedicated to him, with specific small alters for the nine deities. There is a secondary tier of deities known as Omens. They are believed to be from the Dark Realm, and wish to corrupt humans. There is Najja the Omen of Pleasure, Bastet the Omen of Envy, Ebony the Omen of Jealousy, Naunet the Omen of Hatred.

History
Going as far back as recorded history, this faith has had the least global influence however the strongest staying power, given the endurance it has had over the centuries. Especially when it’s offshoot Erianism began to develop and became more influential. It was originally persecuted against, but the Pharaoh of the time decided they had to let Erianism flourish freely, to avoid violence and infighting among their own faith. The split after was swift, and since then Ouaphris hasn’t been threatened.

 

 

Overview
Name: Seriph Jade
Type: Animism
Teaching: Cruelty and oppression weaken humanity and the solution is practicing courage, and morality of heart.
Symbol: Circle of Life
Clergy: Monks
Place of Worship: Temple
Founder: Lou Su
Rituals: Followers are known as Seriphs. Special tea ceremonies are done for different occasions, such as funerals, births, marriages, and lunar anniversaries.

Nature of the Divine
Name(s):
Legends: Seriphs believe in and interact with spirits and the spiritual world, rather than gods, though some spirits may be gods of a sort. In this case, a spirit they call Dasein is said to have given birth to the world, but they do not exclusively worship this spirit. Rather, they interact with the spirits of the common folk, nature, as well as celestial beings, such as the moons and stars. Notable spirits include Spirits of the Pilgrim, Spirits of the Elements, Spirits of the Moons, Spirits of the Heavenly Bodies.

History
Although it’s practitioners claim their religion was the first ever practiced, there is not much evidence to this, though it is agreed to be among the oldest. Its more sophisticated thinkers will merely observe that the precise names and symbols may be more recent, but its truths began with time itself. Lou Su is believed to have assended to a higher plane of consciousness, to where he saw the truth of life and established what is now known as Seraph Jade (named for the jade stone he was meditating on). Now this religion has become split between two quarreling factions. The larger, more orthodox group has become complacent and hopes to avoid change, while the smaller group uses the term Scholar instead of Monk, which reflects a changing sense of clergy roles in the religion.

 

 

Overview
Name: Kunasatou
Type: Panentheism
Teaching: Society is weakened by greed and the only solution is hard work, and obedience to the law.
Symbol: Various
Clergy: Chiefs
Place of Worship: Sacrificial Alter
Founder: Tak Kuna
Rituals: Followers have no specific name, as they are so secluded. Tradition is passed down through a tapestry which recounts Tak Kuna’s experience with the divine. It is taught that all people are given a spiritual gift. One such gift is called discernment, which means being able to help other people discover their gifts. Sacrifices are usually representations of each person’s gift, to show they are cultivating them. Such as a piece of meat by a hunter, or a tunic from a clothing maker. Each community has and maintains its own Sacrificial Alter, where people may stop by for sacrifices, private worship, or prayer.

Nature of the Divine
Name(s): All-as-One
Legends: They believe in a god-like entity of which the entire universe is a part of. In this case, they worship a pantheon of 42 gods, who themselves are part of a greater unity called the All-as-One. All the universe and all beings in it are also part of the All-as-One. Popular gods include Balaur, whose symbol is a man with a spear through his chest and who is said to be part demon and thus better able to fend off the forces of darkness, and Ahalia, whose symbol is a snake and who is said to weave dreams out of the choices people could have made but didn't.

History
This religion, though not a major one, is one of the oldest. It’s existence traces back centuries, and more then likely the result of the fall and reconversion of ancient kingdoms and tribes forming together for safety. Their own beliefs, coming to form a pantheist religion. It’s also a notable presence in the founding of the Abantu under the rule of Chief Tak Kuna. A great warrior, scholar, and who possessed the ability to converse with the All-as-One.

 

 

Overview
Name: Will of the Flame
Type: Polytheism
Teaching: If you are patient and thankful, the Ancestors will watch over you and protect you on your journey to the afterlife.
Symbol: Eternal Flame
Clergy: Vicar
Place of Worship: Chapel
Founder: Garinwulf the Great
Rituals: Known as Followers of the Flame, this religion is exclusive to those who live in Gelboldihr. The clergy is almost entirely fauns, and they oversee masses on Graceday, and include their own wisdoms from study. Through tradition, most dwarves are buried in dungeon tombs with their riches to protect them, payment for the trip into the afterlife.

Nature of the Divine
Name(s): The Ancestors
Legends: Only great dwarfish Lords and accomplished Scholars make it to the afterlife, but if one can gain the favour of The Ancestors they may be looked after on their way to the other side.

History
This faith has existed since the beginning of dwarfish society, and while Fauns have long been fully included, it’s only been recently that Halflings have been accepted. For the longest time their dwarfish blood was ignored and they were believed to not be welcome in the afterlife. However interestingly enough Fauns and Halflings are far more invested in the Will of the Flame. Most young dwarves don’t care much for the teachings of the Flame, and live far from patient and thankful lives. However Fauns and Halflings are consistent worshippers. Older dwarves will join masses and are much more faithful, as their time of life is nearing a close.

 

 

Overview
Name: Mother-of-All
Type: Monotheism
Teaching: Rejoice in the Ocean Mother’s favour, as her children non shall challenger her wrath and your reign. The sea and all its glory protect her domain.
Symbol: Conch Shells
Clergy: Elders
Place of Worship: Coral Reafs
Founder: Ocean Mother
Rituals: Followers are known as Her Children, all life whether Merpeople or other sentient aquatic life. With the Mer King/Queen’s blessing, rituals for the Mother-of-All commence every Hearthday, with dance and music. The Great Conch Shell is blown at High Tide, as they call upon the Ocean Mother and her nourishing energy to flow through the sea.

Nature of the Divine
Name(s): Ocean Mother
Legends: The Ocean Mother is the Demi-god daughter of the Supreme Being, and the first mermaid, known as the Mother-of-All. It’s believed that all of life comes from her deep nourishing waters. Her strong and protective energy can be found near oceans and lakes. Offerings for her include molasses and white flowers. However if you cross her, disrespect her domain, or hurt one of her children, she has a serious anger streak. Wielding a broad blade, she’s known to “bathe in the blood of her enemies,” or manifest in the form of a tidal wave.

History
As long as the Merpeople have existed, the Ocean Mother has been their protector and her legendary favour has been fuel to the Merpeople’s disdain for Land-dwellers. The royal family has gone back as long as people can remember, so it is believed they are direct descendants of the Mother-of-All, correlating to their long and uniting rule. While this faith is near exclusive to Merpeople, over the generations (despite the various belief systems followed by them) near all pirates believe in the divinity of the Ocean Mother. As such, they are often considered Her Children as well, though some Water-dwellers may disagree.

 


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Author's Note

Hello everyone! This is the new World Page, where you can find information about countries, religions, the Nightingale, and almost anything else^^ I will add more info when necessary during the story (don’t want to give everything away yet, spoilers!), I can’t wait to get started!

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Jewel_ELF
#1
Chapter 12: I'm rereading this and I dont know why but it's just hitting me that you use they/them for Yuni when she is being Sochun and I love it
BanaWarrior
#2
Chapter 12: I'm late with the comment, sorry! Sunday I was feeling like mush because I stayed up till 3 am playing board games with my friends :')

And the most curious thing happened when I read the chapter for the first time. The soundtrack lasted until the last word of the Author's Notes for me, but during the chapter itself I was always out of the right tempo hahahaha That being said, back to the chapter!

So first we have Zyanya! I don't know why but I got surprised to know that she's a huntress xD It was super cool to go through the jungle/forest with Zyanya, like we were part of the hunt too! But dude! I got worried when she crossed into Eastland territory! She must be hella strong to be able to run while carrying a DEER!
Zya's nervousness while meeting the Chief makes me wonder if she's the type to get into mischief often, thus why she thought she was in trouble haha And also, here I was thinking that "All-as-One, The Path we follow" for some reason made me remember of "Rejoice in the Ocean's Mother favour" and then! The map is about the Deep Domains!!!! WHAT!!?? Does the merpeople know that?? If they do, would that mean that the Westland tribes have some type of relation to the merpeople?? So many questions!! (besides, the fact it's hobgoblin's hide make it even more eerie) The "Deliver it, towards it's destiny." Made me think about that part in PotC where Tia Dalma is using shells to find something and I think she says "something something, a touch of destiny" xD Fitting, in my opinion.

Oh Pan is next! And our girl is definitely not having a good time :') She seems to have made a kind of friend tho, so I guess that's good? And I'm relieved that she learned quickly enough that being anonymous was the best for her. Oof, okay, no more friend, because they are being separated. All the girls feel like they are walking to their doom, but WE know that Piranha Isles is where Kazume will find Pan so, that's a ood thing! Even if she doesn't know that yet :p
(Also I must confess that I'm curious exactly how things went for Pan to be where she is now. Like, I know the palace was attacked, but, you know, I'm curious for the details too xD)

And now we turn a 180 because we are dropped into a super proper and refined afternoon tea. hahahaha I guess it says a lot that Euphemia still acts and portrays herself with such pose even when she's in the presence of someone she feels comfortable with. Also the "You want power, not just duty" promises us a hella of journey in the future! xD I guess Euphemia's future is one that I'm most curious about. And hey she has a crush! How cute!
The scene with the girls suddenly getting ready to look a picture perfect image reminds me of that similar scene in Pride and Prejudice xD hahahaha But heck, Sophronia is out for blood, figuratively. I feel some complex here. Also, I'm here thinking that what happened with Euphie is called "parentization" I think, when one of the children has to act as a parent for their siblings. And that's very sad and not very healthy.
OH HECK, IT'S THE MAP FROM THE TEASER!!! That sailor is sure lucky! If the map shows a part of Gelbodihr and then stops... I guess the rest would be Piranha Isles and... The Deep Domain again? I see that the pirates will have to fend off the Wintamberg navy :p I wonder what Laguna will think about so many people in her territory hahahaha

What I really like about this next part is that I start with so many questions (mostly 'what vendetta?? and why???") and by the end I have all my answers xD I'm also here internally screaming because THE SICARIUS AAAHHHHHHHHHHH I also was NOT expecting whatsoever to see Khufu and Meretites mentioned since they were the side characters of the side character (that also is mentioned! Hi Kahina!) The fact that Azure Moon seems so mysterious and dangerous, and remembering the plotlines for the crew, I have a pretty good guess who we are talking about here xD
And then we see the crew!!! I'm laughing at our dear crewman saying that "girls are bad luck on ships" when there is a whole Isla living with them for I don't know how long xD hahahahahahaha So it seems that from our bunch of rag-tag girls, Ziwei is the first to reach the crew! I also love how she didn't even had the chance to try to sell her lie LOL Tho with Haoxuan there, it was best that she didn't even tried. And of course Kazuma is distrustfull of new people xD Ziwei endeared herself to me simply by the fact that her introduction is a epic fail of her plans lol

Yuni, or should I say Sochun, seems like a real sweetheart! I think it also helps to separate Yuni from Sochun the neutral pronoum shows up. We know that by then the character of Sochun is up.
And now we have rag-tag girl number two! The new cabin boy! I have a feeling that Junkyu will appreciate not being the "lowest ranking one" anymore hahahahaha Sochun, I think just as a precaution, you should prepare for a lot of bossy guys ordering you around xD But I'm here thinking WHY do they need to go all the way to Spenia when apparently going back to the Piranha Isles is so important and they are super close already. I wonder who they will pick up on the way? Or on the way back xD

Now we have seen almost all the girls! And the adventure seems to have trully started! I'm excited for what's happening next!

P.S: Just a small note on a typo I saw, of "women" (plural) being used in place of "woman" (singular). Not anything major, but since the meaning is different, it could maybe confuse a distracted reader. :p
Jewel_ELF
#3
Chapter 1: Congrats on the job, those are hard to come by these days
BanaWarrior
#4
Chapter 1: :DDDDDDDDDDDD
YEYYYYYY
Good luck on your job and I'm excited for the next chapter!
stormatsea
#5
Chapter 11: THIS IS AMAZING!
Reading through this chapter I was like I love Undina then I was all like I love Anou! Slowly it just turned into I 'm going to love all of these characters and have resigned myself to my fate hahah XD
I loved all of this. Undina is so cute I just wanna squish her! Athan is also just the best bean I adore him (an ongoing trend haha). Also gotta love how chill she took just waking up with legs lol. I can't say I'd be all that chill about it myself. Calypso is amazing, and really went into that motherly role quickly.
Then comes Anou and her engagement party. Oh boy did that escalate, started out so normal and then Pavun had to come in and just be the worst. I was reading and was 100% like don't just stop at breaking his kneecaps keep going. Her relationship with her father is so heartwarming. He's such a good father only wanting the best for his daughter, but also knowing when to just stop and listen to what she wants to do and respecting that was just so heartwarming. Really catching me in the feels there.
This crew is a lot and I love it XD! Takuya just sitting there meditating like it's just the most natural thing in the world despite an actual storm coming had me laughing. Not to mention just how chill Nickhun is will all of it like, "yup this is my life now, nothing weird here" is just perfection. I love the constant back and forth relationship with Hugo and Theo. Theo really just knowing all of the buttons to push to get a reaction out of the other and just eternally amused with it all the while Hugo still adamantly sure that the thing he's looking for HAS to be in this chest of women's garments, and low and behold it definitely was NOT. The part about him having to remove a bonnet from his head made me snort out loud not gonna lie, and how he was not phased by it more interested in the mermaids tears. Though not that I can blame him I'm also hella curious haha. Kazuya's and Junkyu's relationship is great truly 10 outta 10. Also Isla is amazing and truly has made her place on the ship. I loved her talking back to Takuya like yes you go girl, you tell him XD
I can't wait for the next chapter and to meet all these new characters! I'm sure I'll end up loving them all as well! I also can't wait to see how they all end up together on this ship!
BanaWarrior
#6
Chapter 11: IT'S HEEEEERE!!!!!!!
First of all, I was like "Undinaaaa" lol I really loved to see her interactions with Laguna and they playing around (the bubbles sound and then the picked up song gave a whole immersive vibe on their chase!) and I'm here thinking that the mermaid princesses are probably the most carefree, or at least with those two haha. I had to laugh at the dinglehoper reference hahaha Athan is also so cute! He's all -grabby tentacles don't leave me behind- ugh, so cute! It was also pretty nice that Undina's last interaction with her sister was of support and encouragement, because she probably won't talk with them for a long time, now that she got legs :') Calypso is also great! Her levels of motherly reach almost grandma levels hahahaha And it was really cool of her to turn Athan so he could stay with Undina! (his little tail grabbing around Undina's wrist? I went "aaawwnnnn" in 0.1 seconds).

And then I got ANOTHER gift in the form of Anou!!!!!!!!!!!!! Say about an engagement that ends badly (tho we could say it ended well because it was broken in the end :p) Inaaya is such a romantic xD You can see that both Anou and Drishya don't put that much faith in love. Also, I have a feeling that the sister was in cahoots with Pavun, or he just went behind everyone. But dude!!!!! It got me some seconds to realize, but the only place he stopped by was next to the fossilized SNAKE! Tell about forewarning xD I'm really glad nothing really happened (as in, he tried but was unsuccessful) and I was "HELL YEAH JAYESH, BREAK HIS NOSE" lol But Sri Sumbhajee actually hit where it would hurt: the reputation. Through the whole thing it was so clear how much Anou's family loves her and it really warmed my heart. Jayesh is a great father and the part where Anou promised she would make him proud and cried I was "no, I WON'T cry TTwTT" But yeah :') And the urgent message, I wonder if that has any relation with the ship in the storm in the second teaser. And also, AGAIN, last words of love and support hitting my heart right in the middle :') But whatever happened, it must have been REALLY serious that Jayesh left Anou behind not even a full day after she almost got taken advantage of. (Unfortunatelly we know that things go bad ;-; )

And then we have the Nightingale creeeew!!!! It's the first time we were introduces to the whole crew, they were the midde of a heist with a time limit because of a hurricane and my brain constantly went "oh wait, I know this song in the background!!" so you can guess it was a lot at the same time xD It was super cool to see how they all work together (and in less or more obvious ways how they baby Junkyu lol) Of course that Takuya is the type to just MEDITATE before an impeding storm xD I had to laugh at Minhyuk's exasperation and Nichkhun's acceptance hahahah Kazuma lowkey-highkey convincind Ethan that Takuya's plan will work, Theo and Hugo bickering and all the other little interactions between the crew members really gives us a good broad view of their general relationship! I don't think many other crews would manage the feat they did, and I wonder what they need mermaid tears for. Also the bit with the floating piece of eight was super cool! This makes me realize that this bit in this chapter technically happened before the third teaser.

I still need to find my pace while reading and listening to the background music, because while I start in a good pace, with time I start to read faster becuse I'm afraid I will not finish the current part before the music changes and then I get out of step with the songs n.n' But I just need some practice and to stop being so anxious lol I'm also super curious to see how Yuni will join the crew, how things will go wrong for Euphemia and Panthea and what shanenigans will happen with Ziwei and Sophie! I'm also curious to see who will be the first of the "guests" to become part of the crew/to arrive in the Nightingale!
Jewel_ELF
#7
Chapter 1: I kinda totally forgot about this story, ngl, but life happens, we will wait for you if we have to but I'm glad your back
BanaWarrior
#8
Chapter 1: -excited noises- I'm pumped to see this going on! :D
BanaWarrior
#9
Chapter 1: -excited noises- I'm pumped to see this going on! :D