domestic, comfort/hurt, angst
confessions written on your skin[the prompt]:
Chapter 5: Another domestic jundong please. Im really a er for domestic stuff. Sweet fluffy domestic stuff, but also a bit comfort/hurt spices there. I was actually kinda inspired from stories i’ve recently read. Sooo... how about jundong’s divorced lifestyle, but they still act lole they’re married. Maybe because junhoe being the petulant man that he is, one-sidedly decides donghyuk still has to live with him and constantly jealous if any man so much as stand 1 metre away from dong. But, Donghyuk, being the angel that he is, always worries about Junhoe keeping his life together. The reason of divorce may be up to you. They may even decide to get back together again in the future. But the challenge is more how you frame the reason of the divorce but still make ithe whole marriage lifestyle after the divorce sensibly acceptable. Hahaha but, i dont want sad ending, if anything just make it open-ended instead (but it shall incline towards happy ending).
Well.. that is that. Hope you can release yourself from the writer’s block some time soon. Thank you!
kim (koo) donghyuk
when are you coming home? 5:47pm
getting dinner with friends 7:09pm
won’t be back till late 7:14pm
with who?
okay. have fun. 7:19pm
(read 7:42pm)
13cm
we should go out tonight 7:44pm
what was the club we went to last time? 7:45pm
it was called CRUSH 7:53pm
and no thanks 7:54pm
what? why not? 7:57pm
because I don’t want to drag your drunk home again 7:59pm
… 8:00pm
fair 8:01pm
yeah, so no thanks 8:03pm
please? 8:04pm
I’m not going to a club just so you can get drunk and then I have to carry your drunk, crying home 8:07pm
T W O times that happened! L E T I T G O 8:09pm
two times is still too many times june-yah 8:11pm
sorry, I’m not going no matter what you say 8:12pm
besides I’m already in pjs and sipping wine 8:12pm
your best hyung card has been revoked 8:13pm
k 8:17pm
(read 8:18pm)
Kim Hanbin
let’s go out tonight 8:23pm
/sighs/ 8:29pm
okay 8:30pm
is jinhwan hyung coming? 8:30pm
no. your bf is not coming because he’s a bad hyung 8:32pm
how many times do I have to tell you he’s not my bf? 8:33pm
wow. I just meant you’re best friend isn’t coming. 8:34pm
imma tell him you said you’re not best friends 8:34pm
what 8:36pm
no 8:37pm
junhWE 8:37pm
last time he didn’t talk to me for two DAYS 8:38pm
lol 8:41pm
text yun to meet us @ the club 8:43pm
k 8:48pm
(read 8:54pm)
Koo Junhwe
Y O U 12:07am
??? 12:14am
Junhwe? Are you okay? 12:23am
Junhwe? Seriously? Are you okay? 12:39am
Pick up your phone so I know you’re alive 12:55am
NO 1:07am
IM NT OKAY 1:08AM
I MISS YU 1:08AM
LIKE A LOTT 1:10AM
DO YU KONW HOW HRD IT IS TO SEE YOU EVRYDAY 1:11AM
LIKE FCK 1:13AM
I MISS U SO GDDAMN MCUH 1:15AM
FCK 1:16AM
YNHUYNG S TRYNG TO TKAE MY PHON 1:18AM
you said you were okay 1:24am
yun hyung ^^
Is june okay? 1:26am
he just threw up in a club bathroom 1:29am
me and hanbin are gonna take him home 1:33am
are you home? 1:57am
we can’t find his key 1:59am
yeah. 2:02am
hey. sorry you gotta take care of him again 2:36am
we shouldn’t have let him get that drunk 2:38am
it’s okay hyung. 2:49am
you got home safely, right? 2:51am
yup! don’t worry about us! 2:54am
just take care of your Junhwe 2:55am
I mean just make sure he doesn’t die 3:01am
not that he’s /your/ responsibility 3:02am
, im kinda drunk too. 3:03am
just ignore me, okay? 3:05am
(read 3:06am)
Chef Song
What the guys 11:52am
good to know you’re alive 11:54am
how are you feeling? 12:03pm
like 12:09pm
figures. 12:11pm
12:29pm
I texted donghyuk 12:30pm
I know 12:32pm
I tried to take your phone 12:34pm
But you’re very strong when you’re drunk 12:35pm
12:41pm
what do I do? 12:42pm
uh? nothing? 12:44pm
saying anything now will make it worse 12:45pm
you make a good point 12:48pm
but listen to this 12:49pm
what? 12:52pm
I already texted him 12:53pm
you’re an idiot 12:56pm
I know. 12:57pm
you think I don’t know that? 12:58pm
I mean ing look at me 12:59pm
I’m divorced at twenty four 12:59pm
and I still live with my ex husband 1:00pm
does any of that sound like I’m /not/ an idiot? 1:02pm
touché 1:05pm
kim (koo) donghyuk
hey. I just wanted to apologize for last night. 12:43pm
and sorry you had to deal with my drunk when I got home 12:44pm
it’s fine. 12:45pm
everything I said was true
do you miss me
We should talk about last night though. 3:04pm
sure. 3:08pm
I’ve been thinking about it and maybe I should move out 3:09pm
I mean I know we agreed to live together 3:10pm
but it just seems like it’s not working out 3:11pm
I already talked to some people at work and they said I could stay with them until I find a new place 3:12pm
who? bobby?
Are you sure? It’s your dad’s house 3:14pm
Yeah. He was only the architect; he never actually lived in the place 3:15pm
you shouldn’t have to move out. 3:18pm
just give me till the end of the month to find another place to crash 3:19pm
Junhwe it’s fine 3:22pm
I’ll move. You bought the place anyway 3:23pm
I love you
No. your dad designed it. it should belong to you 3:25pm
we’ll talk about it when I get home okay? 3:27pm
okay 3:29pm
maknae
Hey can I stay with you for a few days? 2:21pm
Just until I find my own place? 2:22pm
Sure? 2:26pm
why though? 2:27pm
I mean you’re welcome and all but just seems kind of sudden 2:27pm
I just don’t think it’s good to keep living with an ex 2:29pm
and before you and bobby hyung tell me I told you so 2:30pm
I knew what I was getting myself into a long time ago. 2:31pm
I just… I thought I could handle being friends 2:31pm
you know? 2:32pm
I thought that was enough. if I could love him as a friend 2:34pm
But it’s hard. 2:35pm
Sometimes I even forget how we ended up like this 2:36pm
Like maybe if I tried harder or if I told him I loved him more 2:38pm
Hyung. 2:40pm
You guys got a divorce because you realized you married too young and you both weren’t ready for this big responsibility 2:41pm
It wasn’t because you didn’t love each other 2:42pm
I know. 2:43pm
But you can’t help but wonder 2:44pm
Maybe it is a good thing that you’re moving out 2:45pm
Give you both time apart to grow up and figure out what you want in life 2:47pm
Yeah 2:49pm
Who knows maybe after some time apart, you guys might end up back together 2:50pm
(read 3:01pm)
M Y hyungs
(added jinan hyung, binnie hyung, and yun hyung ^^)
I know we haven’t talked in a while 4:18pm
And I’m sure you know 4:18pm
But just take care of june okay? 4:19pm
(read by jinan hyung, binnie hyung, and yun hyung ^^)
my june
hi
I don’t know how to start this
You’re probably still unpacking at your new place
We were really dumb and stupid
I mean who gets married at eighteen?
I have so much to say.
But at the same time I don’t know what to say, you know?
You were the best thing to happen to me and I wish we hadn’t rushed into marriage because then I think we might still be together right now.
But everyone was right even though I hate to admit it.
we were just too young to really understand what it meant to be married
but hopefully one day
soon
we can start all over
I don’t regret anything. I love you. 11:48pm
koo donghyuk
I don’t regret anything. I love you. 11:48pm
I’ll wait.
Forever.
Even if everyone else tells me I’m stupid.
Or I’m wasting my time.
You’re the greatest thing in my life.
Always have been. Always will be.
Me either. I love you too. 11:49pm
(read 11:50pm)
[commentary]:
probably not wanted you wanted ;; i'm sorry but hopefully you still like it! I wanted to do something a bit more unique/challenging so I did everything only in text format. Which was fun but it's hard to get everything across with just dialogue as you can see. I did leave the ending open (sort of) with a glimmer of hope for these guys since I tend to make them suffer.
sorry bobby was only mentioned (and he's always the bad guy too. what's wrong with me?)
anyway, I'm going to work on the other requests!
happy holidays everyone!
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