Let Me Be The One to Love Ya

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First fic written. Sorry for mistakes.
 
Purely fanmade storyline starring SS501 band members and OC.
 
Heo Young Saeng
Kim Hyun Joong
Kim Kyu Jong
Park Jung Min
Kim Hyung Jun
 
Ma Hyun Ah [Original Character]
 
Fictional characters possibly added along the way~~
 
Be nice if you commented ^^ ~~it's optional but it'll be nice :)
 
-Edit- August 21st 2011
Totally rearranged chapters and stuffs...so if something seems wrong then....uh...you know what...I changed and fixed stuffs ><"
 
-Edit- May 20th 2012
Fixed all verb tense, added missing words and added/deleted a few words...added dialogue. Yes i changed stuffs again @@~

Foreword

 

A girlwho was wearinga black coat was enjoying a peaceful walk.She had long black hair with bangs, tall; with a slim figure and pale skin.She stopped while crossing the bridge and lookeddown at the beach. There sat a boywho waswearing a black jacketsitting on the beach looking out into the sunset. She wentdown to the beach and greeted him. “Annyong Young Saeng oppa.”
Young Saeng glanced back.

“Oh, Annyong Hyun Ah.” Young Saeng replied happily.
“What are you doing here?”
“I’m thinking.”
“About what?”
“Just trying to clear my mind.”
“Ohhhh. Can I join you?” she asked happily.

“Of course.” He repliedandshesat down beside him watchingthe sunsetwith him.

“Isn’t the sunset beautiful Hyun Ah?”

Hyun Ah nodded.“Ne, it really is. Flowers are prettier though.” She laughs.

Young Saeng laughed along with her. “Ne, I agree flowers are prettier.” Young Saeng looked over and saw that Hyun Ah started shivering. “Are you cold?”
“Ne… even though I already have a coat on, guess it isn’t warm enough.” Hyun Ah laughed.

Young Saeng hugged Hyun Ah to keep her warm. “Better?”

“Ne, gomawo.”

Young Saenggave her anodin response.

 

After a couple of hours anothergirl, who lookedexactly likeHyun Ah, ran towards the bridge, and yelled, “Hey twinnie!”
Hyun Ah looked up and asked, “What is it Younha?”
“Come home already, it’s been 2 hours!”
“Arasso!Oppa I have to go now.”
“ArasseoHyun Ah.” Young Saengsaid as he reluctantlylet go of Hyun Ah.She quickly ran off with Younha without saying goodbye, and leftYoung Saeng, alone. His bright mood started to drift and just this his phone beeped.

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Annyeong oppa ^^ see you tomorrow at school (:
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He smiledas he saw the text.Hestoodup and beganto walkhome. He was walking up the steps from the beach, he heard someone call out his name,

“Yah! Young Saeng hyung!”

Young Saeng glanced upand saw his friend Park Jung Min. He was leaning against the railing of the bridge.

“Jung Min-ah? When were you here?”
“Since now.” He says as he chuckles softly.“You’re smiling, was Hyun Ah just here?”
“How can you tell?” Young Saeng asked shyly.

“You always look really happy, when you’ve seen hereven for a second…Yah! You know that you like her, why don’t you date her?”
“Because… I don’t know how to ask.” Young Saeng replied shyly.

 Jung Min smirked.“Young Saeng hyung, you know if you don’t claim her now that new guy’s going to claim her.”
“What new guy?”
“His name is Kim Hyun Joongand herecently moved here. He lives a few blocks down from you, he’s going to be in the same class as us I think andI heard he’s a real girl magnet back at his old school.”
“Why did he suddenly move here?”
“I heard his parents just decided to live here, and his family is rich.”
Young Saeng scoffs. “Like Hyun Ah will fall for that kind of guy.”
“Ahh… but I heard he’s pretty good looking, and pretty smooth with the girls too, you better hurry and claimher before he does.”Jung Min warned and then walked awaywith a smirk on his face and leftYoung Saeng alone.

 

Young Saeng thought about what Jung Min had told him. He glancedout into the sea, and made apromise. “Kim Hyun Joong…I don’t know who you areor what you are,but I know this,you are not going to take Hyun Ah away from me. I swear on it even if it takes me five more years…”

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ZeroKuran501 #1
...ah...mian...no update T__T I didn't know I had to work full time throughout my Christmas break...Happy New Year! I hope to update soon ><"
ZeroKuran501 #2
Thankyu for your comment JungSaeng ^__^~<br />
Fic is on haitus until December...for school reasons and uninspirational and time reasons~ <br />
Please wait for it! ^__^
jungsaeng #3
soooo sweet!!!!!! update nw pls TT I kinda of pity Hyun Joong :(
ZeroKuran501 #4
Thankyu for the comments ^__^<br />
Whoo i updated on time! ><" ~~hu....school got in the way of this...i've been busy studying...I prommised myself I'd update on Sept 22nd~I did it! ^__^ enjoy~
outtheclub #5
thanks for writing!<br />
update soon! xD
graceguarino
#6
huhuhu :( so sad...i hope saengie will come back soon i want him and hyun ah to be together...leader pls give way to saengie...tsktsktsk..pls update soon thank you..
ZeroKuran501 #7
Omona updated ><"~<br />
I'm sorry it took forever~! ><" three chapter update! I'm thinking of adding a bonus chapter too...@@
kimmisoo
#8
ah~~~ no probs^^ Will be waiting! wonder what date that Hyun Joong and Hyun Ah will share XD update please~
ZeroKuran501 #9
Update won't be for awhile > <" <br />
Mianhae~ T__T **got a few things on mind and block**
kimmisoo
#10
update please!! I'll be waiting! hahaha!