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prileX #1
Chapter 6: Thanks so much! This was actually very helpful.

For the first point, I have noted that well! Sometimes, I feel it becomes redundant if I keep saying 'Chanyeol' or any other name so much of even 'he' so I try to find other ways to describe a person but I understand where you're coming from. I'll use that term more carefully from now on!

Secondly, that was a mistype I believe. They're just friends LOL. I'll go back and fix that.

And lastly, I wanted to add new characters to the story but I was clearly too hasty. I was thinking that as well but I had already published it so I didn't know what to do. What would you suggest? I was thinking about taking out chapter two and having the third chapter become the second one, then using the Kai/Sehun scene later. I need some help here, thanks :)

All in all, I'm glad you liked my story! I was so scared to open this review but I'm glad that they were mostly positive. Thank you so much :D
chanbob 102 streak #2
Chapter 7: thank you so much for this review. I was able to see the what have satisfied you throughout the story and what didn't, which isn't much compared to the good ones, so I feel really happy :)
I have credited the shop in my story foreword and paid the karma points, if there's anything I need to do, please tell me and I'll do it. thank you again!
venusheart #3
Hello^^
I've just requested.
Thank you and Happy New Year xoxo
jaxial #4
Requested! Thanks ^^
chanbob 102 streak #5
Requested! thank you in advance!
PuririnLuka #6
Hello, I sent mine's, but do I really need to give my password?
chanbob 102 streak #7
I'd like to get my story reviewed but sadly it got 11 chaps...
stellarstarlight #8
Chapter 2: I've always been curious about review shops. I could never do it myself. If you don't mind my asking, how did you come up with what to focus on? Like, how do you decide what parts to review?
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