SIMPLICITY - - - HIATUS (read Announcement for more info)

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Description

simplicity
editing (beta) and reviewing shop
distanced & Jennay523
Notes
 

Welcome to Simplicity! An editing and reviewing shop run by two best friends who have spare time on their hands! We review and edit oneshots and short stories (up to five chapters). We can also provide services for up to 5 chapters of your multi-chaptered story (just choose the short story option on the form)! 

This shop will open sporadically, depending on when we have time to work on these. As such, we ask that you not rush us or prod us for updates. Both of us admins work and go to school full time, so we only have whatever free time we have to work on these.  Don't let that deter you from requesting though! Just please understand that if you request, it might take some time before we get to yours, we will go in order of requests received. Please read all rules thoroughly and refer to prices. You’ll pay after we post for pickup.

 

ADMINS

distanced - editing

jennay523 - reviewing

Admin note: If anyone wants to submit an editing request, but is unsure of quality of work, please don't hesitate to ask. I am more than happy to give a sample of my writing to show my editing skills (the published stories on my profile don't reflect my current writing skills).
       - distanced

Foreword

A huge thank you to PeakyPearl and Fantasy Advertisement Shop for helping spread the word about our shop! Click on the banner above to be directed to the advertisement shop!

 

 

Another big thank you to fondue- and Salt for advertising this shop and spreading the word! Click on the banner above to go there!

distanced
If there is anyone who is considering getting their story edited by me, but are unsure of quality of work, please don't hesitate to ask. I'm more than happy to provide a sample of my own writing as reference to my editing skills.

Comments

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prileX
#1
Chapter 6: Thanks so much! This was actually very helpful.

For the first point, I have noted that well! Sometimes, I feel it becomes redundant if I keep saying 'Chanyeol' or any other name so much of even 'he' so I try to find other ways to describe a person but I understand where you're coming from. I'll use that term more carefully from now on!

Secondly, that was a mistype I believe. They're just friends LOL. I'll go back and fix that.

And lastly, I wanted to add new characters to the story but I was clearly too hasty. I was thinking that as well but I had already published it so I didn't know what to do. What would you suggest? I was thinking about taking out chapter two and having the third chapter become the second one, then using the Kai/Sehun scene later. I need some help here, thanks :)

All in all, I'm glad you liked my story! I was so scared to open this review but I'm glad that they were mostly positive. Thank you so much :D
chanbob 102 streak #2
Chapter 7: thank you so much for this review. I was able to see the what have satisfied you throughout the story and what didn't, which isn't much compared to the good ones, so I feel really happy :)
I have credited the shop in my story foreword and paid the karma points, if there's anything I need to do, please tell me and I'll do it. thank you again!
venusheart
#3
Hello^^
I've just requested.
Thank you and Happy New Year xoxo
jaxial
#4
Requested! Thanks ^^
chanbob 102 streak #5
Requested! thank you in advance!
PuririnLuka
#6
Hello, I sent mine's, but do I really need to give my password?
chanbob 102 streak #7
I'd like to get my story reviewed but sadly it got 11 chaps...
stellarstarlight
#8
Chapter 2: I've always been curious about review shops. I could never do it myself. If you don't mind my asking, how did you come up with what to focus on? Like, how do you decide what parts to review?