Rimjhim

In Another Language..... (hiatus......i really want to work on this more)

Rimjhim- (n Hindi) the gentle tapping sound made by rain

 

Minwoo stood in front of the kitchen sink, a cup of coffee in his hand as he watched rain fall outside. The tap tap sound it made was a calm melody. He smiled as he heard the footsteps of his lover behind him and he turned to look at him.

“Morning baby”, he said to a tousled hair Eric. Eric came over to him and gave him a gentle back hug and kissed the side of his neck.

“Why didn’t you wake me?”, Eric said and took the cup of coffee out of Minwoo’s hand and took a drink.

“You looked exhausted and I thought I would be nice and let you sleep”, Minwoo said as he took his coffee back. He had laid in bed for a while and watched Eric sleep before he got out of bed quietly and went to take a shower before he went down to make coffee.

“But it’s the weekend, I could always take a nap later”, Eric said with a grin and kissed Minwoo’s neck again and pulled him closer. Minwoo let out a shivery little sigh and set his coffee in the sink and turned to kiss his lover gently.

As they kissed the sound of the rain was like the soundtrack of a movie.

 

 

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charly_tear
#1
Well I've found this just now and I gotta confess I'm a little enchanted, I love these kind of Stories which are mostly capturing a feeling. You did a good job with every little Story, making them nice to read!
LKChoi
#2
Chapter 3: The sentiment is sweet and poetic, "finding love in a Foreign Land", but you must support it with the story better. Dongwan and Andy don't have anything solid to support their love within the story. Work on grammar, spacing and expressing the deeper meaning of things. I liked some of the pictures you painted in the story. The gay couple in the park. Dongwan wandering around Andy's house. There's potential. Just gotta hone your craft.
Ladyerror
#3
Chapter 2: Jinsyung!!! Need more!
yshinnoona
#4
Chapter 3: So cute. Wicked woman with a beautiful dig....lol
yshinnoona
#5
So cute. I really like these little one shot stories
yshinnoona
#6
Chapter 1: Very sweet