Perfection.

Description

Minho's role in The Pianist has taken a different toll on his body.

 

Eating Disorder Fic

JongHo implied

Foreword

"I’ll tell Jonghyun,” Key started, threateningly, and Minho paused, with his foot on the steps.

“Tell him what?”

“That this diet has gone out of control.”

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merennesme #1
Chapter 1: This story was awesome! The pacing was really good, I liked how it wasn't rushed. Also I loved the way you conveyed how scared and frustrated Jonghyun and Key, I could practically feel the way they felt.
2mininthecloset #2
Chapter 1: This story was so great. I'm feeling the feels for Jongho and it's slowly consuming me. This was nice.
YunoYuki #3
Chapter 1: This story is amazing! I feel like it should have more chapters though...
rainingfears_ #4
Chapter 1: This was really good honestly. Like a comment below, you actually wrote out a reason why he wanted to lose weight, and I am sure this is something every person in the entertainment industry face at least once in their career. Eating disorders don't usually happen in a few days, but I like how you paced every scene and the overall development. I can actually feel the panic JongKey has when they entered the bathroom, and to be able to bring out the emotions with just a couple of lines is great. Really great. Sometimes I feel like I can't do that when I write.
There wasn't a concrete ending, but it was good enough. This one-shot isn't boom-fantastic-baby awesome, but it's brilliant enough to stay in my head. I haven't seen much SHINee fics these days, so to read one is very refreshing. Keep up the good work, and congratulations!
PyroVektor #5
Chapter 1: DAMN THIS PACING. It's really well written, there are times I'm screaming at my screen because Minho is such an idiot. Thank god it was a happy ending. WOOO~
MintyPetals #6
Chapter 1: okay but can people stop commenting "congratulations" just to get karma points on a beautiful story that deserves some legitimate decent feedback because this was absolutely brilliant
usually when people write oneshots about eating disorders i find they're very fast-paced since eating disorders are a slow developing thing but you did really, really well when it comes to plot development, and not only that but it was realistic too?? like you gave him a perfectly legitimate reason to want to lose weight and it was all extremely accurate and emotional and you just checked the whole criteria despite this just being a mere oneshot you know???
this was really wonderful and moving even though it was short and i enjoyed it a lot, i really did. i'll be sure to go and scavenge for that other eating disorder fic you mentioned in the foreword.
congratulations on the random feature -- i'm glad to have read this <3
lovelyme23 #7
congratulations!
infinityjong #8
Congratulations! :D
typewriter98 #9
congrats c:
JulianaT #10
Chapter 1: Grear one shot!
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