Chapter 2: TTUTT sequel pleaaaaaaaase .. Pretty please :3

*sob* i like it ! good job <3

yesssss sequel xD
I'll be on the reading list, just so you know 8)

awh i cried ;_;<br />

i cried. My flower boy. :( this is good. Thank you for your hard work.

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so so sad,<br />
this made me cry. <br />

Aww so sad BUT I really loved this! I just had to read it because you wrote it and I was amazed! You really are an amazing writer and I hope you write a few more one shots. This was a really nice long awesome read I loved it from start to finish

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THiS WAS SO SAD BUT I STILL LOVED IT <br />
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can I creyyyyyy ;AAAAA;

It's pretty sad. But I was confused when he said "i know you're shot" Like what? Did she get shot as in medication, or did she get like gunshot? But i got it at the end. ;) It's a pretty good story. Many plots arent the same, it was a twist when he suicide. But not all story is a happy ending. The title is pretty good. It's interesting in a way. The foreword matches the chapter, and i think you did a pretty good job slowly revealing their stories, explaining that she got sick. Overall I think if you want a rate, I'd give it a 8.5/10. I mean, I'm not the best writer too cause i know my writing style, and i dont know if you mind that im critiquing you, but its my opinion. :)