Metanoia

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A magical realism flash fiction story, 1355 words long, about a girl who finds out about her true origins, her true family, and her true love. 

Foreword

Metanoia /mɛtəˈnɔɪə/ 

pronunciation | (meh-tah-NOY-ah)

(n) The journey of changing one's mind, heart, self or way of life. 

Amelia is a girl living in a house of chaos where her stepmother is excessively strict and demanding and her father wrapped around the stepmother's finger. One day she is taken to another world, transported there at the cue of three words, where she finds happiness, joy, love, and belonging. 

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yeoja12 #1
Chapter 1: I've come back to your story a second time, after having some time to think about it. I like the idea you have and the symbolism you use. It really gives the writing meaning. I don't think you necessarily need to make it fluffy or romantic, but I think it would be nice to know a little more about the relationship between Amelia and Chen. I also think it would be good to know more about why Kalopsia is important or what it represents to her, and why her decision of where to live was so hard. As for the ending, I like that it is unclear. It let's the reader interpret it in their own way!
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