Oh Inha was a college student when she was murdered......she was a cheerful girl...with beautiful eyes..She was murdered on the day of her graduation..she was shot dead.....The reason unknown!!! There was a police investigation but they couldn't find who did it and why??She was of 24 years when murdered.... Inha wanted to become a doctor.
She was the only child in her family. After a year of her death her mother saw her ghost in her dreams...their conversation goes like this:-
Inha : "Hello mother. It's seems that you are doing fine.!"
Hae sung (mom):-"Inha where have u been don't you know that Mom misses you!!"
" I have been trying to find the person who killed me"
"Why? You should just live peacefully in heaven"
" From today I will be starting to find the murderer who killed me"
"What would you do when you find that person"
"I will kill that person . Because I was shot near the brain I don't remember any thing but I will definitely find that person.."
"You shouldn't do that In ha you will be a murderer too..!!"
"I would have been a murderer if I was alive..!! Mother please don't try to stop me.I just came to tell you this .....
Live well mother"
"Wait Inha you shouldn't do this!!! Inha wait!!!..."
Inha went into several people's dreams the people whom she has known but non of them was the answer to inha's question. Inha went into the dream of a person named kang chul he was a closest friend of Inha but while coming out of his dream Inha dragged Lee Jung suk in to the world of dreams.... It was unknown to inha. Lee Jung suk as he woke up he found him self in a weird place he thought that he was dreaming but soon realized that it wasn't a dream.
A guy approached towards Lee Jung suk saying that he can take him out of this weird place but it's a rule in World of Dreams that no human is allowed physically and if a human is there than the dead people who are in the dream world can use the body of the human to become living again.
That guy was a culprit who was killed by police for doing bomb blast. That guy's name was Kim su ho. Lee Jung suk goes with him..
Do you think that Inha might be able to save him or know that she has dragged a human into a dream world??? Find out in next chapter...!
If you have any answer for this than plz send a answer..
Chapter 3: I love the idea of this fic but there is just one thing that is bothering me. It reads like a surmised version of what needs to be a more detailed story. If you take each sentence and try to extend it by three-five more sentences, turning one sentence into a paragraph then your story will have more depth. Try to be as detailed as possible. So far we don't know what is happening around Inha, what this dream world looks like, sounds like, smells like, and feels like. You need to describe everything about everything so we can see it clearly like we'e there. You also need to describe what Inha looks like, Jongsuk and Kangchul too. They might have long dark hair or short dark hair, or even auburn hair, flaxen hair, oakre hair. It could be bristly hair or soft shiny hair, matte hair. There are so many words you could use to create this wonderful world you've come up with, so do your best to use them. Use the internet to search them and keep a dictionary by your side at all times. Use your words love.
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