Sorry

To My Unknown Lover

I remember when I first saw you,

you, with your beautiful smiles 

and your styled hair. 

 

You captivated me,

you mystified me,

you put a smile on my face.

 

You gave me hope when I had none.

You brought happiness

that you were kind enough to share.

 

Time went on,

and now,

I suppose I love you.

 

I'm bad at love,

inexperienced,

I've only felt it once. 

 

But you make me feel like he did,

you make me laugh like he did,

you light up my world like he did.

 

You smile at me like I'd wished he did,

you make me feel whole like he did,

you make me feel like I'm worth something like he did.

 

So I suppose I love you, real love,

And I suppose like all love,

this love must end.

 

 

 

 

A/N: Pretty please leave comments - not only do they make my day, but I understand this is a unusual "story" (it really isn't a story) and would like to hear what others think of it. 

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hikari0415 #1
Chapter 3: This is what BTS should be reading from us because this is what i ing feel everytime I look at them.
Klunicorn-_- #2
Chapter 2: OH MY GOD I THOUGHT I WAS THE ONLY ONE WHO THINKS ABOUT THIS STUFF IN BTS
Klunicorn-_- #3
Chapter 1: And to think I even thought for a SECOND that this was going to be a smooth sailing story...

Even after reading all your other stories I thought maybe...maybe there's a small chance, and then I read the last three lines -_-

And I'm totally willing to see you experiment with this writing style, it doesn't make you want to skip the passages of reading so much in this poem style writing. Also, it can put more emphasis on words uncommonly noticed or less noticed than usual. Looking forward to it(getting emotionally wrecked). ^ - ^

I wonder where all the other comments are?
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