Chapter 1: this is simply stunning. i love this so much. this is beautiful. i don't know how to put it, you are a truly brilliant writer. ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ
i love your writing so much; the way you describe vernon being eight and afraid, the way you describe him growing up and meeting jeonghan again and again, the way he eventually becomes attracted to jeonghan—everything, everything is very well-written.
the ambiguity is what really really makes me fall deeply in love with this fic. why would jeonghan sneak in at night, who is he, where is he from, what is he doing? he is such an enigma, a mystery i would really want to know about, but him being a mystery itself is what truly makes the story wonderful. i don't know if i'm making any sense. it's your writing!!! i love it so much, it truly brings the story to life ㅠㅠㅠㅠ
while i am not sure if the ending is really the ending, or if there will be another chapter; i will be satisfied either way. the ending—ambiguous and full of promises of adventures and new, exciting things—truly captures and reflect the entirety of the fic.
there is no other way to say it: it is a masterpiece. thank you very much for writing such a beautiful fanfiction, one i will always remember and hold dear to my heart.
i love you, and am looking forward to your other works (or chapter!)!! <33
(tl;dr i love you, i love this, and i love your writing. please never stop writing.)
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