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Plotline3 Astro-Rocky Open

CJMata Natty My character

This is my character and also plot summary ^^

- Plotline 01 : 01

- Plotline 02 : 02

- Plotline 03 : My character ^^

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Plotline4 4Ten-HeeO Open

xXMonstaAriXx  Ari Accepted

Talent Twinn: 4Ten's HeeO (All Talent)

 

Hello Ari, Thanks for begin my first applicant ^0^ Honestly, I didn't a fan of 4Ten but HeeO is really pretty and charming. You doing really well for personality part; detail yet understandable. I like that you mention about WJSN, I love this girl but they pretty inderrated. I like how she look really strong but she is from JYP XD You know that JYP isn't a place of a super strong look girl. She is a girl who got high experience but it's ok. And a lot of Song suggestion!! Yahhh, I see nothing to comment ^^ Thanks again ^^

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Plotline2 Bae Suzy Winner-Mino

KwonBoA Liam Accepted

Talent Twins: SNSD's Taeyeon (Vocal), WG's Yoobin (Dance), SNSD's Sooyoung (Speak)

 

Annyeong Laim, Thanks for apply to the story.
Overall of your app is good. Most is short that is good when it not too much detail but for trivia part, Can you add more detail? Such as Likes, Dislikes, Hobbies, Habits? I know nothing about that thing of her. Another part is accepted. Thanks again ^^

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Plotline2 DreamCatcher-Siyeon Sehun

Sweet-Lava Lizzy Accepted

Talent Twins: EXID's Solji (Vocal), Lovely's Kei (Dance), Red Velvet's Wendy (Speak)

Hello, Lizzy. Thanks for apply to my story.
Yahhh, I'm not a fan of Dream Catcher but Siyeon is really charming. Overall of your app are great, detail (very detail) but not hard to understand. Password is correct. But I think she is too talent in language. Well, I said max native-fluent is 2 but semi-fluent also too much for 4. And she is too much born with golden spoon. Her past experience also too much with her age. Ok, may got someone but credit in many thing is too much. In conclude if she got all of your detail, she don't need to debut in idol group, too much perfect. Another thing already great. Thanks again ^^
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Plotline01 VIXX's Hongbin Open

xXMonstaAriXx Ari Accepted

Talent Twins: VIXX's Hongbin (Vocal & Speak & Dance), VIXX's Ravi (Rap)

Hello, Ari. Thanks for apply to the story.
Thanks for begin by my first male application ^^ The great visual, Hongbin, he handsome (really handsome XD) Not much to see Muslim in this industry that really interested. The smart boy, he seem like someone who can choose to be in another way but choose to be idol same with SJ's Kyuhyun. Overall of your app is great. Oh! Thanks for mention about Chanyeok, yes, that boy is tooooo noisy XD But an error that I think for is I check from many web, they said Hyuk is Main or Lead Dancer aka Dance line. He may too talent for only a dancer for plotline01. Another things are great now ^^.

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Plotline Ulzzang Love Interest

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Plotline Ulzzang Love Interest

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sweet_lava
#1
Chapter 4: The hype started!!!
xXMonstaAriXx
#2
Chapter 3: Thanks for the review! I've fixed my app^^
xXMonstaAriXx
#3
Chapter 3: Hi! Just wanted to ask, can we apply twice? Like a boy and girl character?
sweet_lava
#4
Chapter 3: I've fixed the app, is there anything else that I should fix? Thank you btw, and yes siyeon is very charming^^
Jewel_ELF
#5
Chapter 3: Is it ok if a friend and I do a collaboration?