In one kiss, you’ll know all I haven’t said

Description

“I could make you happy,” Tiffany had told her that night as Taeyeon looked for her shirt within the scatter of clothes that made up Tiffany’s floor.

Foreword

Wrote this in one sitting (and died).

Kinda angsty, but not tragic.

Title came from Pablo Neruda.


Word Count: 4400+

Angst Meter: Tolerable amounts of ouch

Love Meter: Selfish and selfless

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UndefinedCharacter
#1
Chapter 1: A well deserved happy ending. 🥹
Mihyun101 #2
Chapter 1: I remember reading this in wordpress and damn the ing taeny feelings i had before just came in- crashing through my heart and now im dead
sriey23
#3
Chapter 1: This made me cry..it feels so real. Tq for making happy ending for this angst..hope to read more storyis like this from u soon. Tq and stay safe authornim...
girlofeternity_ss #4
Chapter 1: I thought it was mutual pining at first but then it was a love triangle. The angst was worth it though
Spes17
#5
Chapter 1: This made me cry. I was once in Fany's position. Except, mine wasn't reciprocated and even after hoping and begging for love many times. I was left with nothing but a pitiful "I'm sorry. You deserve someone better" glad this one has a happy ending. Thank you for giving me a happy ending through your story in TaeNy's characters. Dunno if Ive already read and commented on this one before but you did a great job authornim.
NJ-Soshi
#6
Chapter 1: It’s wonderful as expected from you.

Keep going. We are looking forward to read more, You're an amazing writer ^_^
Thank you ♥
EmptyTinkerbell
#7
Chapter 1: You messed with my feelings so much. After reading the foreword, I expected fluff, but it started with angst, then there was fluff, back at it again with angst (I was afraid Tiff died or something), and finally the end was fluffy. This rollercoaster was ing awesome (excuse my language)! But seriously, it was so great. I didn't know how the story will end and as much as it made me anxious, the unpredictability of it all was amazing. Heads down with respect.
But about the couple - I love love love Taeny here. Even if Taeyeon was using Tiffany at the beginning and hurt her, she finally started developing feelings for Tiff. Hallelujah! I would be heartbroken if one of the girls suddenly said something like "Nope, I ain't playing like that, goodbye forever". Well, it almost happened but Tae acted really well, I'm proud of her haha I felt so much relief after knowing that the girls love each other. Yay! ^^ I stated it already, but I feel the need to say that again: this story is awesome. I enjoyed reading it a lot! :) <3
Usagihinatairene #8
Chapter 1: Omg my heart was breaking and I was literally crying. Your story is making me so emotional, it just bring out my inner feelings a bit, feelings that cannot be reciprocate is a . Forgiving someon is so easy because we just drown into their presence BUT waiting for someone who doesn't love you back hurts the most. I so happy that both manage to love each other whole heartedly. Ah tears of joy, I'm not even joking.
spacetime
#9
Chapter 1: Wonderful writing. Emotive and at times, poignant.

I almost skipped by this story ... very glad I didn't.

Thank you, Writer.