Chapter 1: Whoa i never read this kind of story. It was confusing at first, but by the end of the story, everything clicked together. It's full of sorrow, a lot of 'what if's come to my mind as i read it. It's certainly a good story :)

Chapter 1: This was so... I don't know how to describe it. I have never read something like this before -- especially not in a one shot. I LOVED it. It was so short yet had so much meaning. It was beautiful, if I ever have to describe it. Very simple, but very beautiful. I love how colours came in all the time, I love how curt and short their conversations are yet always developing and bringing depth. And I love how things were only revealed at the end when no one expected it, since there was absolutely nothing on their backgrounds in prior to that. There wasn't even much emotions or development in this story yet I could still feel it happening behind the scenes, which is really weird and cool because I can never do that and have never FELT that when reading other stories.

I don't have much to critique on this piece except that sometimes the sentences seem a little jumbled, like you don't know which word goes where? And also the tenses were a little inconsistent; one moment it would be in past tense and the next it would be in present... But I really liked that you used short sentences, never letting it go on for too long (like what I always do smh). It suits the theme of this one-shot very well. Sometimes your grammar was a little off too, and I couldn't really understand the sentence... I skipped those that I couldn't understand but that didn't mean that I didn't enjoy it any less.

Thank you for joining Blossom Roads! I hope you had fun writing this as much as I enjoyed reading it. And I really hope that through this contest, you will be motivated to write more and that you will improve in your writing because it is always very encouraging to watch writers improve over time! Good luck on your future works!

xoxo

Chapter 1: Oh my god this was awesome!!!! :O but why do I feel so emotional after reading this? :( It's still wonderful; their connection and odd relationship. Although Baek was kinda surprising, but I don't know I feel like there's ....guilt? and maybe some attachment to it. Thank you for this and goodluck ♡