Chapter 1: I really enjoyed this drabble! the grammar is not perfect in this but it still really gets to me in the heart :) I liked how you tied in the stars at the beginning of the piece and then again in the end, it worked to mould the whole piece together very well (and made good use of the prompt!) Another thing i was impressed with is how you are able to express Jimin's world and what Yoongi meant to him in such a short space in time.
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