Never

Never
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Never

 

She was so pure and innocent like a magnificent dandelion growing during the most terrifying storm of the year. No matter how many times she lost her petals, she still stayed invincible.

He was wild and passionate like an expressionist painting with its lively colours and fathomless lines. It was in his nature to hurt whoever was close to him but she wasn’t afraid to taste the poisoned apple. Her affection was of the best kind; she didn’t ask for a lot but she gave her all anyway.

Her love set him on fire, he was burning from desire and lust. He wanted her so badly like a starving person yearning after the last piece of meat. She was his light in that rotten, pitch-black world that he had to live in and he was her compass in the maze of her responsibilities.

They needed each other like air and it still hurt so much when they were together.

They didn’t want to hurt each other, nevertheless they did. Their love was as fragile as a drop in the ocean, getting lost in the vast amount of water. They kept it closely to their chest like it was the most vulnerable glass bead on Earth but it still slipped through their fingers. It fell to the ground, scattering into dozens of tiny pieces just like their hearts. Just like her. She fell and he couldn’t catch h

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LocketKay
#1
Chapter 1: This was nice :)
You're a good writer
dannyal #2
Chapter 1: You're such a great writer. Seriously. You have my respect and admiration.
Elythia
#3
Chapter 1: It's strange. This is a really short drabble, yet it encompasses so many intense emotions. I think it takes real skill to be able to write something so great in just a few sentences. The imagery is so vivid that it engraves itself into the readers' minds. And that ending breaks hearts, really. If Hoseok is to sing to his angel, he'll probably sing EXO's Monster lol (random thought but yeah xD). Kinda funny because in BST and Boy Meets Evil, Hoseok is portrayed as the young boy who is taken in by the girl who's sweet yet poisonous (like a rose with thorns). Over here, it's the reverse happening, so it's like seeing two sides of Hoseok HAHA. Overall, you did a great job with this drabble. Kudos to you for making me feel all sorts of things with just this few sentences ; u ;
Young-woon #4
Chapter 1: wow is the only thing i could say
hikari0415
#5
Chapter 1: You have no idea how shook I am after reading the last line. Drabbles like this should be out there!!! I absolutely love it ♡
Kathys
#6
Chapter 1: OMGGG!!! I would absolutely upvote this multiple times if I could because wow! The last two lines left such an impression on me. Oh my god, I can't even form words now, it's perfect.
Okay, so first of all, I'd like to thank you for writing (and sharing this) because I've been dying to read some angel & demon au, I'm so weak for them and my only regret is that it's so short. But it has its own little story and we can figure out the rest. And it's amazing like how well you portrayed their differences and also their star-crossed love. The end is so heartbreaking and I can't help but imagine a spin-off when she's human without her wings and he watches her closely but cannot touch her or anything because maybe she can't see him and both of them are struggling because she can't remember him but missing something like it's a part of her. Wow, my thoughts are running wild thanks to you. It was amazing, I loved every single word of it. You're such a creative and always improving writer, I adore you and your stories! ♥ ♥ ♥