Hourglass

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"If you believe in it, let’s meet again someday, another place in a healthy body."

Foreword

I'm going to dedicate (that sounds so formal lol) this to Rasika, because this fanfic is the reason why we started to talk. That's why I'm really thankful to this fic, because it's brought me so much happiness this year.

A version that's been beta-read by others than me will be posted, when it's done!

Also posted on AO3 @ minghaon

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Evelyn-Everdeen
#1
Chapter 1: This is such a beautiful and heartbreaking story.

To start this off, I would like to mention 2-3 things that seemed a bit contradictory to me while reading through this. The first thing is that the hand that Junhui can't use anymore changes (at first, he can't use his left hand anymore, later on when they're in the cafe it's the right one). Also, that second time that Jun sleeps over at Wonwoo's place and Wonwoo calls the ambulance, you change the time (first it's 4am and then 3am). The last thing, that's not necessarily contradictory though, is that at Soonyoung's party Jun mentions that his kiss with Wonwoo isn't really his first kiss, though later on you wrote something along the lines of "he kissed no one this way before".

In general, I really like your writing style. I like how you pay attention to the character's feelings and the way you describe things and situations. Junhui's view of Wonwoo during their first meetings was really nice to read, you did a great job with that!

I think the part in this story that made me laugh and relate to Wonwoo a lot was when you wrote "It's 4:57am, also known as way too early"!

It's a bit sad that Minghao didn't have a lot of appearances here, but it's also understandable since, while being a big factor for Jun, he wasn't the main focus for this story. Seeing Wonwoo's and Jun's relationship develop was really beautiful, though it hurt my heart that Jun couldn't be honest about this with Minghao at first (and that Minghao didn't tell Jun about Mingyu either). But seeing Jun approve of Mingyu was sweet! I very much hope that Mingyu and Minghao are still in contact.

The scene where Junhui just left Wonwoo without telling him anything was really sad, though also very understandable. Of course Jun would want to save Wonwoo from as much pain as possible and he would choose whatever way he thinks of as right. I'm glad about all the experiences they could still make together, though.

Thank you for sharing this story with us!
pinkfinite-16 #2
Chapter 1: oh god I started tearing so much and I had to watch a vlive in order to calm myself down. it felt so real omg. thanks for writing such a story :')
sassybeach
#3
Chapter 1: I cried through the whole story. I cried. I cried. Omg. I forgot my tissue. And I cried. I don't care, I Love this so much. If anyone don't want to read this, you really have to read this. I recommend u too read this. It's worth it.
SakuraYuuki #4
Cool
Awake-In-The-Night
#5
Chapter 1: This is wonderfully sad... It's been a long time since I remember feeling sad about a fic, but right now I kinda feel helpless. As if I was one of the two... Your writing style is really nice, so I hope you'll continue writing such great stories.
thumbs
#6
congratulations on winning the bid!
barbiehyukkie #7
Chapter 1: omg this is so heartbreaking ㅠㅠ
tbh this is the first time i read wonhui fic and yeah kinda fall in love with these couple after i read this story
and also your writting style is so great. you can bring the reader to getting along into the story
thanks and i'll anticipate for another great fic of yours
FreeEuropa #8
*gets notified of an update*
*comes running to one of my favorite fics ever*
*no update*
OH
love you OP