letters 1, 2, 3, 4, and 5

Sunshine Love

#1

   Dear Mina, 
hot diggity dog ur so beautiful and i like u a lot
_______________________

#2

   Dear Mina, 
i thought about that last letter a lot
i realise that my handwriting is terrible
sorry about that
_______________________

#3

   Dear Mina,
its probably because i was asleep the first time you asked us for help w/your “secret admirer” but i didn’t realise how embarrassing it is having my letters examined by you guys
i wish nayeon and jihyo would stop trying to guess because ngl i’m kinda offended that they think these are from minatozaki sana
minatozaki sana is a snake!!
i am nothing like that!!
_______________________

#4

   Dear Mina,
im glad you can’t read my writing because if i had to listen to my letters being read out by you and those hoes everyday i think i would kill myself
but seen you pout when you can’t figure out what i’ve r rw ritt written is super cute
and yeah
i really like you :)
_______________________

#5

   Dear Mina,
it’s only been 5 days but nabongs already found out that I'm ur “secret admirer”
i’d lay low but i like seeing ur face when you find these letters in your locker and the face you make and the way you stomp ur feet a little when you can’t read my writing
it feels a little bit freeing to have one less person to hide my feelings for you from
and you still don’t know but i really like you
_______________________

   Jungyeon manages to get through 5 letters without imploding, which she supposes is good, because Mina hasn’t stopped smiling.
“So how did Nayeon find out?” Mina asks.
“Witchcraft.”

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kiddoatheartu #1
Chapter 1: Your interpretation of Jeongyeon on your story is always stupidly in love with Mina. I'm not complaining though but I'm Jeongyeon trash, and I feel sorry for her for being so whipped for Mina that she's basically becoming a complete idiot ?. But nonetheless I find it cute cause it very JeongMi like. Hehe. Thank you so much author-nim for another great story, hope to read another JeongMi fic from you soon or any fic that includes Jeongyeon.
Perfect_shot #2
Chapter 4: Super cute, I really like your writing style.
snowflakes
#3
Chapter 4: Damn it, I'm inlove with writing skills. You gave me fluttering feelings all over again for my parents. Ugh, i love my moms!
nojamOppaJEONGYEON
#4
Aww this fic is super cute! Dwfinitelwpne of my favs and dare I say best Jeongmi fic!Thank you so much for this author nim! And please make more Jeongmi fic! love ya?
cCyrus123 #5
Chapter 3: This fic got progressively cuter bold Mina is LIFE
bluelyps27
#6
Chapter 1: I'm so glad this fic is completed (because it means I don't have to wait for updates) and even though I've yet to read it all, I can't help but insert my two cents right now.

LOL You have a way with words; very clever. ..."heart palpitating in its bony cage". ha ha ha Many other examples ... in fact, just the whole darn thing. It was a real riot to read.

The only thing I would suggest (and it's a really measly suggestion) is the formatting. Maybe some spacing between the dialogue just so it's easier on the eyes? Do you see how pathetic my constructive criticism is? I can't come up with anything better because the writing itself is very good and I see nothing wrong with it.

You're a very good writer. IIRC, I may have read your other stuff and thought the same, too. Great writing. *checks your other fics* Ahh yes, I've read your Seulrene fics! And now that I've developed a sudden interest in Twice, I can finally get into your other fics. Hooray *jumps for joy*

Thanks so much!

PS. A fellow Aussie! Yippppeeeeeeee ;p
khnagr
#7
Chapter 4: Shyshyshy jeong is the cutest aw ;_;
Heartshaker #8
Chapter 1: Lmao Jeongyeon my fav loser ?
gracefuljm
#9
Chapter 4: Sweeter than a candy >< hahahaha i can't stop smiling/ laughing XD