Mysterious Package

Description

Jennifer Kim is a nerdy girl who always being bullied because of her looks, goodie goodie attitudes, and her intelligence at the most famous elite highschool in US a.k.a Wood Private Highschool

She's always suffered everyday. Being bullied stuff at school, having an annoying stepbrother, "witch wicked stepmother" and she is must to endure its everyday

And then her life completely changes after she's get a mysterious package

Foreword

Hello, i'm still newbie in this kind of writing thing so i want to say sorry first if there is many mistakes in this fanfic lol. This story based on my own fiction hope you guys enjoy it and please comment so i know where i must to improve my writing skill :)

And sorry for my grammar bc english is not my original language 

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Me_Mei #1
Chapter 1: Hey,
first chapter! O.O
I enjoyed reading but there were two things that disturbed me a little.
Firstly, sometimes you get your words a little mixed up which is fine because it didn't disturb me too much but I still wanted to name it. ;) And secondly, you put in some pictures but I, personally, prefer descriptions of places/feelings etc. as you write a story and that's part of writing. Therefore I missed descriptions a little.. ^ ^'
Still, I'm excited about the next chapter. :D I wonder whether Kookie's the REAL Kookie or 'just' some fan. O.o But I'll see. ;)
Fighting! <3
Me_Mei #2
This sounds really dramatic but I'm totally up for it.
Let's see how things will turn out. ;D
Fighting! <3
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