Before Daybreak
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In the midst of a meadow was where low-key arrogant flower spirit Luhan found bashful Kris who was drunk as a sack but very ready to flirt up a storm. Deep conversations are shared under the moonlight but as a mysterious fog looms towards them, everything including their fateful encounter is questioned.
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Foreword
Runner-Up in ⇝Synchronicity Monthly Writing Contest - November Round⇜!
Note: This is part 2 of my 2016 NaNoWriMo project - Goal: 5k (Click for parts 1 and 3)
"the fact that there's romance, but also not really romance makes my aro heart flutter ;D" - fefedove
"wow...this is beautiful. I think I was always craving for this kind of fic, one that's poetic in the AH it's written, a love story but not a love story, one where someone could actually get away with being cheezy as hell. I love all the things questioned here, love, life reality. How innocent the banter between Luhan and kris was. It WAS poetry, this whole FIc... Thank you for sharing your talent <3" - lockedoutofheaven96
"Philosophy major approves! :p great job incorporating the eternal methaphysical questions into this fluffy piece of perfection. Luhan's visual soo enables me to imagine him as a flower spirit, he is ethereal in his beauty! Well done, fantastically written, i love finding such gems here!" - vickymatters
"This IS poetry. It's so whimsical, cute, slightly tragic. I love it especially the part where they question what really is real and what isn't. I absolutely love your innocent style of writing, so keep doing just that!! ;)" - tykawa
"Truly, time felt endless in this created world. Whichever the case, both the boys' personas were distinct and well developed. You did an extremely good job at this. Still so beautifully written, beautifully done. I felt like it was a dream, the whole thing, like it was a memory etched in my own brain. That's how well you brought the story to life, and through mostly dialogue too. Amazing job, per usual." - veneficious
"I love the philosophical dichotomy between reality and fantasy that you explored. And the fluff was very well intertwined without taking away from the deeper aspects of the story, which I really liked. ^^ Solid piece and I love this flower spirit setting that you created. :)" - luv_kero
Entered into: LOVE FOR SINKING SHIPS A Short Story Contest
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DISCLAIMER: Apart from resident flower boy Luhan and certified male god Kris whom I unfortunately do not own, everything that is involved in this story belongs to me. Any plot idea or dialogue that may resemble that of a fellow work is merely coincidental. Please respect the right of ownership and kindly refrain from plagiarism. Unless my permission has been given, please do NOT copy, print, repost, save, translate or redistribute this story in any way. Thank you very much! ♥
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