Butterfly Girl 나비소녀

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Suho is a dreamer. He yearns for an exquisite alternate dimension where the glowing sun shines upon brightly coloured flower meadows as he races across fields, past unicorns, amongst pretty little fairies, all the way to the end of a rainbow whilst in the arms of the butterfly girl.

Foreword

Placed 2nd in 「 ♡ 」 THE RABBIT HOLE ► Week 1!

Second runner-up in the World of Literature 2016 Fanfiction Awards!

This story has been recommended by Exo Fanfic Gems, my exo recommendation library, EXO Recommendations Archive and EXO Recommendation of Fangirlness.

"This is just so...breathtakingly beautiful! The way you added the details in the story is so perfect and vivid... You created a world within a chapter." - maleficentx

"Wow, I just love the imagery in this. You're a very capable writer and your words just seem to flow well. I loved how you made the story come alive through all five senses. It was sweet, cute and a refreshing read. :} I'm interested to see your other works now." - gaksitalGaksital

"Your writing is very beautiful. The way you arrange the words into such sentences is astounding. Please don’t ever stop writing okay you’re wonderful like really really wonderful." - chariseuma

"Very cool, very creative. It's as if I read a work from a famous author - that kind of feel. It's all soft and fluffy." - cyanic100

"First love, you described that perfectly. Everything is beautiful, hopeful and magical." - kukunoona

"It's so beautiful! It's soft and sweet, but not overly fluffy. It's so nice to see someone being able to describe the art of reading and I think you did it wonderfully." - Alyania

"The best story I have ever read. Everything you described here was vivid and I could imagine it crystal clear. The way you conveyed the emotion and turned it into words really mesmerized me. I wish to see you as someone successful in the future and may God bless you because you made my day today :)" - MadChild

"It's like a fairytale. A really well written one at that. I really think it could be up on the shelves along with the classic fairytales. <3" - Akiko27

"While i was reading this, I truly felt that this was art. That your words strung together like poetry. Although short, it was so creative and had an etiquette feel to it :)" - Mimimimmimim

"Out of all the beautiful fics I have read, this has got to be one of the best. It's a oneshot yet, I felt like I was in a different world. I felt like I was there, watching everything happen. Every single word you used fit in perfectly. The way you described each scene made it seem completely magical. There isn't a single thing I would suggest you to change." - gorjessdestaeny

"aww this is so beautiful <3 this one was so worth reading! I felt so light and happy, reading this<3 beautiful descriptions and although it was short it felt so complete, good job, sweetie:)" - Angel110

"This was such a sweet little story to read. It made me smile at how whimsical it was and it transported me to another world momentarily. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece of art! :)" - meeno24315

"The writing style is, in a way, similar to NLMG. It's so dreamy, and it takes me to another world full of fantasies and full of good feelings. I'm so grateful that there are authors like you here." - paulamariehenslow

"Wow. I could literally visualize the entire chapter in a dream-like quality, in a hazy sunny kind of setting. It was truly surreal. This is one of the best stories I've ever read of my bias. You managed to create magic in just one chapter. Beautiful. Loved it very very much <3 Fantastic job ^_^" - Exotic91

Credits to: Summer Breeze

DISCLAIMER: Apart from the angelic Suho whom I unfortunately do not own, everything that is involved in this story belongs to me. Any plot idea or dialogue that may resemble that of a fellow work is merely coincidental. Please respect the right of ownership and kindly refrain from plagiarism. Unless my permission has been given, please do NOT copy, print, repost, save, translate or redistribute this story in any way. Thank you very much! ♥

This work is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-NoDerivatives 4.0 International License.

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starfan24backup ^{135 streak} #1 Jan 19, 2024 05:26:12

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Hi Author niangniang!!

Wow this looks great!!

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EmptyTinkerbell #2 Jul 8, 2018 10:56:32

Chapter 1: Wow, this one shot was so magical! I'd like to think that the butterfly girl was real despite her disappearing in the library. And despite everything looking like Suho's dream hah It was such an awesome story, the plot was so creative! Thank you for this nice shot ^^

Nnn_249 #3 Oct 19, 2016 03:06:41

Chapter 1: Woohuu~~ author-nim ^^ your way of arranging the words into perfect sentences were amazing ~~ storyline daebak >.<

lovekiller_tsuna #4 Oct 16, 2016 05:52:05

Chapter 1: It's beautiful! ^~^

SunDaeDreamz #5 Oct 12, 2016 21:18:31

Chapter 1: This is a beautiful little story. I love it.

Exotic91 #6 Sep 18, 2016 15:34:41

Chapter 1: (///_///) Wow. I could literally visualize the entire chapter in a dream-like quality, in a hazy sunny kind of setting. It was truly surreal. This is one of the best stories I've ever read of my bias. You managed to create magic in just one chapter. Beautiful. Loved it very very much <3 Fantastic job ^_^

paulamariehenslow #7 Sep 13, 2016 15:42:53

Chapter 1: How should I even start with my comment? Before you suggested to me that I read this, I already have it on my subscriptions and also bookmarked it for reading. Your foreword already piqued my interest and (seriously, I really don't find out who wrote the story I'm reading until after I finished it so I will not be biased when making a comment), as usual, I didn't know it was you but I guessed along the way. And my guess was indeed right. The writing style is, in a way, similar to NLMG. It's so dreamy, and it takes me to another world full of fantasies and full of good feelings. I'm so grateful that there are authors like you here. Usually, you have to have conversations so your reader's focus will stay on the story and that they will not get bored. People usually love conversations because it makes them feel like they're the character and they get to be in the character's shoes. But you didn't need conversation. You didn't need any dialogue. You made a really short one, but it came out beautiful. The words you spewed here are so beautiful that it's okay if we, your readers, will keep reading on and on. You seem to really love incorporating nature to your story, and I love it. I love how you sometimes have more than five sentences in a paragraph, but I never got bored reading. Although this is too short for my liking (and this is a compliment, I promise you) because I would have loved a longer version of this, but I guess you really did make the right decision on cutting it this short because it's sweeter that way. :) Thank you for giving such a wonderful experience yet again, author-nim. P.S.: I do hope you kind of make a sequel to this. I'm not sure how, though. Huhu. God, I'm not helpful at all with my suggestion. But I really do want a sequel. :'( Forgive me.

meeno24315 #8 Sep 13, 2016 01:10:11

Chapter 1: Okay. So I don't usually read one shots as well.. they're just too short for me LOL I really love investing in characters and following them on a long journey but honestly, I've seen your stories everywhere and so decided to check it out!
I'm not disappointed at all. This was such a sweet little story to read. It made me smile at how whimsical it was and it transported me to another world momentarily.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece of art! :)

FrozenInside #9 Sep 6, 2016 15:56:25

Chapter 1: Wow! I don't know what to think of this, haha. It was well written, that's for sure. I think you did a really good job switching between reality, the dream.
However, I'll probably put this in my category of fics that made me feel angsty and seems kind of confusing. I'm probably the unpopular opinion but I didn't feel light or happy while reading this (besides the singing in the rain part. I chuckled at that). I just felt so angsty. I could understand Suho's emotions but I just wasn't able to feel anything but sadness, despair, just anything you can put into angst. There also aren't a lot of explanation about why/how they met in dreams, and the butterfly, the lilac. Does this happen to other people as well or just them? I think I'd have probably enjoyed it more if it was like "your soulmate will be revealed to you in your dreams. However not all soulmate safe still alive or real". Or something like that to explain this.
This obviously does not mean this was bad. You were able to make me feel something, which is good. I did enjoy reading this also, like I said. Your writing style is nice to read and definitely a 10/10.
Thank you for writing this! :)