Drown

Poems

The water is deep,
And I drown in your eyes.
You're all that I see,
You're all that I breathe.

I'm swallowing a mouthful
Of briny sea water,
But I can't stop loving you,
Not for a second, minute or hour.

The water surrounds me,
I'm plunged into the dark.
I'm suffocating, I'm gasping,
I'm hoping you'll pull me out.

Your hand stretches out
Just a second too late,
But I know you wouldn't save me.
I knew this was my fate.

To get lost within you,
To lose myself in your eyes.
Sinking deeper, and drowning too,
Choking on bittersweet lullabies.

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MinnieCrafts
#1
Chapter 14: OMG I LOVE IT SO MUCH THANK YOU AUTHOR-NIM SARANGHAEYO
heonnni #2
Chapter 13: *claps* beautiful
you can literally think of any ship and fit it in with this poem AHHH omg my heart so good
MinnieCrafts
#3
Chapter 13: that sounds like some jinkook love story right there
keyoppa_aina
#4
These are so good! I wish I m good at rhymes too >< lol
heonnni #5
Chapter 11: Whoa
This really hit me in the soft spot dang whoa you're also a great poet who knew? Wow these are really good... great job!
MinnieCrafts
#6
Chapter 8: Chapter 7 & 8 = :'(((((((( STOP BEING SO SAD
MinnieCrafts
#7
Chapter 6: how do you even?? you freaking genius i can'tttt
THIS ONE COULD LEGIT BE A PLOT FOR A ONE-SHOT I SWEAR
MinnieCrafts
#8
Chapter 5: OH MY GOD I DID NOT EXPECT THAT
READING THE TITLE MADE ME SPAZZ OUT BUT AFTER READING IT IM JUST DEAD OML
THIS IS SO CUTE ASDFGHJKL I LOVE IT SO MUCH OMFG
Except that part where you said I'm technically not his wife when I am indeed his real wife ergh
BUT OMG THIS WAS CUTE AND IT MADE ME SO HAPPY READING IT YOU WROTE IT BEAUTIFULLY
GOOD JOB AHHHHH
MinnieCrafts
#9
Chapter 4: Yikes I hope that poem was directed to you...
MinnieCrafts
#10
Chapter 3: YOU TELL THEM
that so true tho society is messed up