Not a Loser

Not a Loser
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Here you are Daengel.  Hope you like it and that it is fluffy enough for you, I did the best I could with it. You are a meany-head!

At some point I started looking
at the ground more than the sky
It’s hard even to breathe
I hold out my hand
But no one holds it. 

 

                I used to feel that way, but not anymore.  Everything changed the day I met you.  Sitting there on the curb, crying as you watched a street musician as if your life depended on it, that’s where we met.  I almost stumbled over you.  

                Now there is you, to help me look up.  You are the air I need to breathe and the hand I need to hold to steady me. Your smile is the one that gets me through my days, pulling me from the dark back into the light.  You are my angel, my saving grace.

 

At some point
I’ve gotten scared of people’s eyes
I’m sick of crying so I tried smiling
But no one recognizes me. 

 

                Since the moment we met, you have helped me to be happy, to not be afraid.  When we met that day it was the first time in ages that I wasn’t afraid to meet someone’s eyes.  The sad smile you gave me brightened my world more than the sun.  I couldn’t help but smile back.

                Your hand in mine is the only thing I need.  My heart is slowly healing, one day at a time.  Together we will keep each other strong.

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Foreverins
#1
Chapter 1: This is beautiful.. ❤️
SunDaeDreamz
#2
I kinda have a short drabble thing. I work better with them. I'm not one to like using 3 pages to say the sky is blue and the grass is green. I leave much up to the imagination of the reader. I think you can tell more story with less words if you don't do all the imagining for them. And thank you, making this song have a happy meaning, was not easy...lol
NoonaYoung
#3
Chapter 1: This is surprisingly short, in term of the length of this fic, BUT, it is well-delivered!
Good try in using and matching the song here ^^
Kasung #4
Chapter 1: "the sad smile u gave me brightened my world more than the sun" :""""")
First of all let me praise how u accepted this challenge, the song is a sad mess and u... Oh god, u manged to bring the sweetness and u made the perfect image of how an angel met his sun :") that was amazing :") <3
BekkiSpector
#5
Chapter 1: <3 Very good <3
Dumbeldore
#6
Chapter 1: It's truly beautiful, but to me it's like an extended prompt. It contains a lot of feelings yet it isn't personal since we don't know who's thoughts they belong to. I like it very much, I do, but I also hope you'll write a longer story that hides behind these beautiful words. Maybe it's just a poem to you and you want to keep it short, but with your writing skills I wouldn't have even thought about it twice before jumping into a wonderful dreamland of scenes written down in a computer
LoneShiba #7
Chapter 1: SQUEAL!!!!!!!!

GEEZ THIS IS GREAT~~~~

IT GAVE ME GOOSEBUMPS, THE SWEET WORDS AND LYRICS TOO !!!!!!


THANK YOU AGAIN AND AGAIN UNNIE, I LOVEEEEEEE IT!!!!!!
Red300 #8
This is sweet, much happier than Flowers. I was working on a sequel to my own Loser story a long time ago, I may pick it up again in the future.