Not a Loser

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So a friend of mine was highly upset with me for my drabble Flowers. To keep her from killing me I had to write a fluffy SunDae based on Loser.... Seriously, how I get fluff from that violent, suicidal mess is beyond me, but here goes...  The outcome may not be completely fluffy but I did my best.

Foreword

I also decided to make this my first attempt at a song fic, playing off Taeyang and Daesung's lyrics in the song.  Taeyang's lyrics and POV will be in Orange and Daesung's in Purple to help you keep them straight.

This story is entered into ~ The Finishing Dot ~ Writing Contest

My poster was made for me by ❀ Mystic Multi-Shop ❀.  You should check them out.

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Author's Thoughts
SunDaeDreamz
Yaya for my pretty new poster!
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Foreverins #1
Chapter 1: This is beautiful.. ❤️
SunDaeDreamz #2
I kinda have a short drabble thing. I work better with them. I'm not one to like using 3 pages to say the sky is blue and the grass is green. I leave much up to the imagination of the reader. I think you can tell more story with less words if you don't do all the imagining for them. And thank you, making this song have a happy meaning, was not easy...lol
NoonaYoung #3
Chapter 1: This is surprisingly short, in term of the length of this fic, BUT, it is well-delivered!
Good try in using and matching the song here ^^
Kasung #4
Chapter 1: "the sad smile u gave me brightened my world more than the sun" :""""")
First of all let me praise how u accepted this challenge, the song is a sad mess and u... Oh god, u manged to bring the sweetness and u made the perfect image of how an angel met his sun :") that was amazing :") <3
BekkiSpector #5
Chapter 1: <3 Very good <3
Dumbeldore #6
Chapter 1: It's truly beautiful, but to me it's like an extended prompt. It contains a lot of feelings yet it isn't personal since we don't know who's thoughts they belong to. I like it very much, I do, but I also hope you'll write a longer story that hides behind these beautiful words. Maybe it's just a poem to you and you want to keep it short, but with your writing skills I wouldn't have even thought about it twice before jumping into a wonderful dreamland of scenes written down in a computer
LoneShiba #7
Chapter 1: SQUEAL!!!!!!!!

GEEZ THIS IS GREAT~~~~

IT GAVE ME GOOSEBUMPS, THE SWEET WORDS AND LYRICS TOO !!!!!!


THANK YOU AGAIN AND AGAIN UNNIE, I LOVEEEEEEE IT!!!!!!
Red300 #8
This is sweet, much happier than Flowers. I was working on a sequel to my own Loser story a long time ago, I may pick it up again in the future.
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