Cut of A Knife

Description

I remember the first time I set eyes on you.

 

I stop and stared.

Something about you kept me transfixed;

I couldn’t take my eyes off you.

It’s not like I wanted to, anyway.

Foreword

Another Jongkey oneshot (:

(As if I write anything other than Jongkey other than a little 2min)

I'm getting less and less satisfied with the things I write ._.

Oh well. I hope you guys like it :D

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vainilla #1
at the beggining i wish this was a song, 'cuz the rhyme was so perfect and beautiful... but the end... i guess a song can be so sad yes... but it broke my hearth so much T^T
vainilla #2
and there it goes the last shatered part of my hearth

OH MY GOD I'M CRYING!, WHAT IS THIS?!!!! T^T
Anysoul #3
:'( *cries my eyes out*
I love this! So poemie :')
Very touching!
Your a great author :)
luvshinee5 #4
ohh my gosh . . . . that makes me soo sad!! D: aww key mustve loved jonghyun soo much D: made me cry D: Your a great author bruhh :D
baekskimchi #5
dear author ,<br />
GREAT JOB . .<br />
T.T<br />
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baekskimchi #6
O..m..g . This is d first kind of dz fic dat made me cry (mind my lang , my head is totally +&%* now T.T)<br />
poooorrr jjongie !! T^T<br />
those culprits .<br />
darn u .<br />
+&€%@*/!:=^ YOU !! TOT ~<br />
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Myonestar #7
AWW *Sobs* Poor Jjong, I felt so bad for him... having to go through so much pain and loneliness. *sobs* I really loved reading it, it may not have been long but to me it was still well written and beautiful to read so bravo :3
blue_toast #8
What??? T_T Key!!! Why??? Fate, why???? T_T
luckydolphin #9
OMG!!! SO SAD!!!! KEY DIED....<br />
:(
JaeRinA #10
OMG!!! I love this~~<br />
tis oneshot is more to like a poem..<br />
nevertheless it's awesome!!<br />
i could feel the way JongHyun felt.. empty w/out Key~~<br />
I feel really sad and down starting fr. the a ct of knife part till the end~~<br />
it's a great one!!!
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