Chapter 1: I loved the story. Short yet sweet. But im kinda bothered by the Y/N. I wish you could give the OC a name. She may be fictional but i think it would be best if she has an identity.
Chapter 1: This. Feels right and wrong in so many ways xD but Yuta should hv seen it coming. Who wouldnt fall for another guy who has always been there for u, right? Moreover, it's Lee TaeYong! :D
Btw, u might hv posted this w/o proofreading & there's a few mistakes and spelling errors, just saying tho. Nevertheless, this is an enjoyable read ^^
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