[P] Partial Eclipse Of Heart (by DarkJustice)
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I, in any way, do not own the story. It was purely made by DarkJustice alone. This is just for proofreading purposes only.
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PROOFREADER'S NOTES
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Please take good note of the green commas, periods and em dashes. I've also fixed the paragraph spacing as the general rule is that only one person would speak per paragraph.
Foreword
She was a rainbow, but he was color blind.
And if she had the chance to be with him again—even if it was just for a day— she would take it.
And in a heartbeat, just to see his face again, and be by his side,
She'd take him back.
Maybe.
And I think the first sign you will notice when you begin to have feelings for someone,
is just how easily jealous you get,
when they give others the attention that you crave.
And Little did they know,
Both of them were going through the,
Partial Eclipse Of Heart.
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