First Kiss

Description

Myungsoo wants his first kiss to be with someone he wants to kiss, not someone he has to kiss.

Foreword

Myungsoo worries about his first kiss.

 

Just a short fluff of a story that suddenly pop into my head.

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hikmahkotoha #1
Chapter 1: Nice
Myinahla #2
Chapter 1: Well, this oneshot was good.
I am going to be honest with you : The ending kinda disappointed me. I was expecting MyungSoo to go all shy on SungYeol and to tell him how he has loved him for a long time... And not both reacting this way, like it is completely normal to kiss his bestfriend while reading some scenario.
You see what I mean ?
It could've been longer. SungYeol could've been surprised at his bestfriend's action. I don't know. The ending looks rushed to me.
Maybe it is just me being weird, but that is all I felt after reading it.

Sorry if I sound mean. That's not what was intended.
I'm pretty sure you'll be able to make even greater stories because you have the potential for it.
I trust you for this.

Nonetheless, it was pretty good so thank you. ^_^
Sungyeollo #3
Chapter 1: MY SHIP IS SAILING.
very_ship_them #4
Chapter 1: YES
I'm dYING
hellofanfics #5
*squeals
OMO~ IT'S SO CUTE AND FLUFFY!
Rosebill #6
great story
wintersugar #7
Chapter 1: This is cute. I hope you write more myungyeol stories :)
Myew_na #8
Chapter 1: Wow I really liked it~ Original and sooo cute (:
Thank you very much <3
mar_Lyeol #9
Chapter 1: Sweeeeeeeeeetttttttttttt
fanizuniga #10
Chapter 1: Oh yes thank you! I have been so deprived for some myungyeol ♡.♡
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