Fall Out

Description

Where did this feeling go?

Foreword

Title: Fall Out
Author: EggPanPockyMan
Focus: Jinki & Kibum
Rating: PG

This is a one shot. I had a huge urge to post something. I don't do drabbles often, hardly at all. I'm not even sure if this is considered one, haha. Anyway, I typed this up quickly today, just a way to filter thoughts and ideas. It's not as edited as my other works, but hey, that's ok. It's nice to put out something not completely polished to my brain. Enjoy.

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Jinkeyk
#1
Chapter 1: Short but beautiful
DinoNumber4
#2
Now, I typically don't read alot of since I'm extremely lazy<br />
But I love this so much that I can't put it into words. The way you described everything was so surreal and magical(lol that sounded corny to me) that I had been able to picture clearly in my head, even if this was a "drabble" The last line really struck a chord with me or some reason<br />
I'm definitely going to come back and read this<br />
It was simple, short and bittersweet<br />
I loved it.<br />
Four for you author, you go author
key-tten
#3
To be honest I’m even surprised that no one has commented on this before me :O This plot...I’m not sure how to precisely express my opinion about it but the only thing I can say is...it’s touching. It leaves an after taste when you read it once which makes you retrace your steps and read it over again. Bitter yet beautiful.