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Day by Day
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Hayi's lying in her room, she felt tired for today because it has been four days she had to lead the team training of arts. Fortunately this is a weekend, Hayi thinking that watching a descendant of the sun would be very enjoyable. Tonight Jennie and Jisoo not invited to hang out, because they may well as exhausted. When the drama Descendant of the sun begin suddenly a phone rang.
"Hello?"
"Hi?"
"Jiwon?"
"Yeah it's me"
" What's wrong ? "
"Umm, do you remember your promise?"
"Promise? I never promised "
"Oh well I'll hang up"
Hayi laugh.
"Yaaa, I'm serious"
"All right, where we will go?"
"I'll pick you up at six, we'll go running in the morning. You have to lose your weight"
"What?" Hayi shocked. And then Jiwon laugh.
"You go to sleep, I do not want you oversleep"
"All right, good night Jiwon"
"Have a nice dream Hayi"
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09:45
In a park.
Hayi and Jiwon already surrounds the park for a long time. They laugh along the way. Hayi feel very happy, it was evident from her expression that continues to glow. Jiwon never failed to make her smile and laugh. And it makes Jiwon happy.
"Jiwon, I'm tired"
Hayi occupy a seat on the edge of the basketball court. While Jiwon sitting next to Hayi.
" Lame "
"YAA You asked me to run around the park almost two hours, I'm a woman"
Hayi hit  Jiwon while Jiwon couldn't stop laughing.
They then fell silent. Still feeling tired. The morning breeze made them feel welcome to linger in the park. This morning the park was so crowded in visiting children and they parents, as well as a few of couple young.  Jiwon turned toward Hayi, Jiwon see her face is so quiet with her eyes closed. Jiwon smiled in his he

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Rubybeauty1982 #1
Chapter 14: Holy cow! Did Hayi and Hanbin actually 'do it?' If so, how will Bobby take the news? Man, I feel so bad for him. I hope he punches Hanbin in the face for touching his girl. There is a fine line when you touch something that isn't yours. Sigh...then again, it's Hayi's fault for giving in too. It almost seems as if she wanted to 'do it' with him too. Breaking up with him is probably the best thing for their secret relationship...although I still feel horrible for Bobby.

I hope Bobby and Hayi can share some sweet memories together before you break them apart. I mean, let him have a piece of her too since Hanbin beat him to it (if you know what I mean). LOL. As for Jisoo, I hope she doesn't pressure Bobby into liking her because you can't force someone to like you. It takes time and if there is no chemistry or sparks there, it's best not to hook up.

I'm looking forward to your next two chapters because I'm interested to know how each and every one of these characters are going to be affected. I hope there will be some fist fights too. A little action scene won't hurt. :D Keep up the good work and update soon!
jj_jokvven #2
Chapter 14: complicated love. love is you~~~
lssshxxi #3
Chapter 14: Bobby just come to me if hayi hurt you :")
I wait for another chapter authornim fighting ^^
c__hyi #4
Chapter 14: YOU ARE SO ING GOOD AT MAKING THE TEASSER
jj_jokvven #5
Chapter 13: jaewon babyyyyy. eum ur video? is that junior liem and putri titian?
Rubybeauty1982 #6
Chapter 13: Oh man. I feel bad for Bobby. If you plan on breaking Hayi and Bobby apart, please let them have a happy break up. I would hate to see them leave each other on bad terms.

Hanbin needs to back off for a while until Hayi gets her feelings straighten out. I mean, it was cool of him to save Hayi from One and his stupid gang, but he needs to wait until Hayi breaks up with Bobby first before he makes a move on her.

Please let Bobby and Hayi kiss too. If anything, he deserves it since he had waited for her for so long. That would make me a little happier knowing that they're going to break up soon.

As for One, what is his motive towards Hayi? Does he like her too? Or is there something that he wants from her? I'm curious about his character in here and it excites me that he is showing interest in Hayi. She is always surrounded by handsome men!

As for Hayi, I know that it's hard to let go of your ex, but they are your ex-boyfriend for a reason. She should enjoy her time being Bobby girlfriend for a while before they separate. They should create some good memories together. I would be very happy with that.

Is Jisoo going to play a in this story? How will she take the news if she found out that Bobby is dating Hayi? Will she hate her friend? Or will she destroy her relationship with Bobby? I'm anticipating her character in this story because she could either play a good girl or a really evil girl.

I love this story and I hope you continue to update. I promise you that I will leave long comments as long as you update. I hate silent readers that don't comment. It pisses me off because they don't realize how much work we take out of our busy life to update stories on here. Anyways, keep up the good work!
Rubybeauty1982 #7
Chapter 12: Hello. I am sorry you're in a bad mood. So, you need motivation huh? I can give you some ideas if you like?

1. I think Hayi and Hanbin need to have some kind of closure about their past relationship. Obviously they still have feelings for each other, but the fact that Hanbin has been 'using' Lacie (or whatever her name is) as a 'rebound' because her personality was similar to Hayi (to which he ended up dating).

2. Hayi and Bobby are already dating, so I don't think it's fair to Bobby if she decides to break up with him and go back to his best friend. That would be awkward and uncomfortable. Not to mention, there will be major tension. In reality, I think people value 'friendship' over 'relationship.' (Just my opinion).

3. Based off the music video you provided, I'm assuming that you're going to hook Hayi and Hanbin back together right? I think Hanbin and Bobby should have a 'man to man' talk about Hayi. It's really up to Hayi who she wants to be with in the end. Either way, I don't mind her hooking up with either one of them.

4. Lastly, I hope you'll continue this story. I am a big fan of your work and hopefully you'll be able to update soon. :D (FIGHTING)!
jj_jokvven #8
Chapter 10: wth hanbin?!!!! i really hate how guys think that dumped another girl for their another one bcs they love another one more make the one who got dumped less hurt. it's still hurt. so much.
i want hayi to be happy. to be happy with the right one.
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