Despondence (Monsta X- The Lost Clan pt.1)

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"I have no hope left in my heart anymore, but knowing you are there.. I would do it all for you, only for you" Minhyuk muttered under his breath hoping that the group would hear it behind closed doors. He tried to push away his doubts but will they be able to fulfill their promise, the oath that they have swore upon? Will the 7 boys of the X-clan be able to give their 'all in'?

Foreword

The ALL IN mv had me thinking for days already so, here's a monsta x fic! The comeback was amazing and it had me dying especially at the chorus because *cough cough* BODY ROLLS! UGH. Haha anyway, I don't know how is this gonna progress and end so let's just see where this story will take us! This is also technically, my first writing piece to share on the internet (bc I deleted my first story on wattpad and deactivated my account there. lol) so I hope you enjoy reading! ;u;
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J-hopearmy #1
Chapter 2: okaaayyy.... you need to update soon...
i'm so curious!!!
hehehehe....
Minini #2
Chapter 2: Hmm, I'm always in (no puns intended) (okay maybe yes) for a MV-based story! Gotta love how people interpret them differently, maybe one day I'll write my own version too :)

As for this, I can't say much since it's barely started. If you get me to stick around you'll often see that I'm blunt, oops, so I'll start immediately: first, pay attention to the tense switching you do! Pick one, it's either past or present tense. Second, show, don't tell! One perfect example is Hyungwon going outside "being the obedient son that he is" - the cases are not that bad, but I'd still encourage you to let the reader decide he's an obedient son instead of saying it.

Sorry, I'm not that good with compliments unless I'm really invested in the story and have read a few chapters, haha ^^ I still enjoyed it enough :)
encodespress #3
Chapter 2: This is interesting~
And I come for hyungwonho~ :3
Moonkil4321 #4
Chapter 2: IN LOVE!!!

Cain wait for the next chapter :)
J-hopearmy #5
Chapter 1: okay, what's this??? update soon! i'm curious
Moonkil4321 #6
Chapter 1: IT SOUNDS AMAZING!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter Author Nim!
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