A day in the life - 3

A day in the life of the Songs
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SJK's pov

"Babe, babies, breakfast is ready"

"Yaaaayy!" Then the kods came running towards the kitchen leaving me and my wife alone in the room. 

"Hays we have adorable kids"

"Obviously because we're their parents hahaha. C'mon babe you seem hungry"

SHK's pov

While we were eating our breakfast. We heard the doorbell rang. 

"I'll get it" said joong ki.

I consider our house very safe. So joong ki opening the door isnt a big deal. We have guards guarding our gate. And even if somebody evil came knocking i know joong ki can handle it hahaha. 

"Babeeee we have visitors!!" 

I then stopped eating and went to the living room to see who stopped by.

Aaaannnndddd guesss whoooo.

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Tbc
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A/n

Sorry for the cliffhanger hahahahahaha. Again, i would like to say thank you to those who commented, subscribed and also to those who stopped by to read this story! I really appreciate it expecially given the fact that this is my first time writing. I would also like to apologize if you fond this story boring. Please inform me if ever i commit mistakes or what may. Please please please do vote, comment and subscribe!! Especially comments hahaha it feels nice reading your comments thank you people! Love lots x

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Wennyhodi #1
Chapter 2: I need you to wrote a longer chapter, authornim. But now, it's pretty nice to read althougth the chapter is really short. Please continue <3
Wennyhodi #2
Chapter 1: So sweet... going for chapter 2 now.
greensnake #3
Chapter 3: Hey. Cute story.

Few things to keep in mind, though.
1. Mind your punctuations. It can get confusing when there is no punctuation.

2. Capitalization. For nouns(i.e. names). Also, your 'I's.

3. Read your story again and again. You'll be able to catch tiny mistakes here and there when you read your work. Trust me, I always do this, each time I always find something . It just means that you're improving.

Just continue writing. X
pandamonstah #4
just realized how short my chapters are. Sorry huhu promise i'll do longer ones next time. Huhu. Love lots x
flostopx #5
Chapter 2: Aww, this is so cuuuùte!! Love the plot, interesting. Keep going author-nim~
ambai90 #6
Chapter 1: their twins name mo yeon and si jin perhaps?
haha totally adorable
pandamonstah #7
Thank you so much for commenting, subscribing and viewing huhu i really appreciate it!! I'll just sleep a bit and then i'll start writing the next update. Thank you so much!!
melindaapr #8
Chapter 1: Can't wait for the next chapter :)
triliana #9
Chapter 1: I like your story....keep writing
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