Ending in Five Senses

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Description

He fell in love with his five basic senses...

He fell into a heartbreak by using these senses...

Foreword

CHARACTERS

 

KIM CHAE HEE

"Why are you sorry?"

 

MOON TAEIL

"I'm just... I'm sorry..."

 



He only wanted her to see him in a different light, in a different angle. But that soon turned out into a chaotic romance, they knew the strings were bound to be cut- but deep inside, their hearts are thudering not to.



Thank you for the poster, estro!

 

Reviews:

 

"Personally I really enjoyed this story as it was a very cute story but I was unsure on why the story ended the way it did. I felt as if there was a plot hole that made the ending a little unexpected and felt rushed. But I have to admit I really like it! So kudos to you for a great job!" (77%)

- Di Angelo Multi-Shop

 

 "It was enjoyable, thrilling and it makes the reader crave more.  It had its pros and cons, so hopefully, for the next upcoming works, it will be better. :)" (80%)

- Cheesecake Shop

 

"Once again, I really do like your idea of writing a story through the basic senses - it’s definitely the first time I’ve read something like this. It’s a shame your story is so short, otherwise I would totally fall in love with this story (I’m a HUGE er for detailed stories). Nevertheless, I still enjoyed this story and it idea of it!" (63%)

- Heart, Mind & Seoul Review Shop



A/N:

Yes, folks! This is a oneshot so gather round. Haha, I'll be making a sequel since I myself ain't satisfied. I am in a giddy fit and rush to finish this in fright of a case of writer's block and procrastination- and this is the outcome. Grammatical error shouldn't be taken too seriously- like please people, you can still understand it, and nevertheless- you came here to read and not to inspect. But I do enjoy CONSTRUCTIVE criticisms.

Please do NOT plagiarize this, this is a fictional work of art. It was an idea after listening to "Open your rice" dozens of times. So there, enjoy~! *hands you a tissue*

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BrokenWinged
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BrokenWinged here from Cheesecake Review! Will be working on your cheesecake, thank you for trusting us. Also, NCT is <3