Chapter 1: Too bad it ended right there. :3
You're actually good at writing with bits of humor there :)) But i would also like to suggest that you could write longer since it didn't really put the idea of a "finished" story. It was more like of a prologue than a complete one.
P/S: I'm saying this because I want to read more from you since I can see the potential of writing you got in there ^ ^
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