Peek-A-Boo, I'll Find You

Description

Choi Minho, the chief of Five Pointed Star FBI Agency. Has brains beyond his years and graduated from high school at the age of fourteen, with the hopes of becoming a lawyer. Everything changed when he saw his best friend get murdered right in front of his eyes.

Mha Do Hye, an FBI of five years. Doesn't understand the minds of killers and thinks that they should all go and rot in hell. She lives by herself in an apartment. Her parents were killed in an accident.

Bae Jung Ah, an FBI for four and a half years. She's like an older sister to Do Hye and would give up her life for her. She lives with her parents and her older brother. Doesn't understand some opinions of Do Hye because she hasn't been through that much during her life as she was always protected by her family. Chose to become an agent so that she could give protection to others.

 

Three of them have worked together for quite a number of years and they've been through many cases before, from thefs to suicides. But will this particular murder case change everything? How they see the world, how they see the victims?

And most importantly, will it change the way they see the murderer?

Foreword

-NOTICE-

SOME CHAPTERS ARE ONLY RATED BECAUSE THERES SOME IDK, GRAPHIC THINGS IN IT THAT MIGHT MAKE PEOPLE...uhm..idk what word to use...scare? YEAH SOME THINGS THAT MIGHT SCARE SOME PEOPLE, so no adult themes in here, I REPEAT, NO ADULT THEMES OR OR ANYTHING LIKE THAT LOL

But don't worry too much, it's not really that scary, someone just notified me and told me that I probably should send out a warning :/ So yes, I am doing it now ahaha. BUT REALLY, IT'S NOT THAT GRAPHIC ^^

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Ok, well, this story's for a writing competition, Ready, Set, WRITE! {SHINee Writing Contest}, made by dinomyte and deestar.

The prompt I chose was the image one;

Yeaps. :) I don't know, depends on how the story progresses but I might throw in a few other prompts, maybe. :L

ANYWAY YEAH, well, this story's meant to be crime, mystery, sort of. Something I haven't tried yet ahaha. And Im still torn between whether I should put something supernatural in it or not... :/ BUT OH WELL

YES that is it.

Ladidaaah, enjoy!

 

xoxo

 

-Disclaimer-

I only own this plot, not the characters. Any resemblance to real-life incidents is purely coincidental. I also do not own any of the pictures or photos that I post up unless stated.

  

©SweetStrawberryy 2011

Comments

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LocketKay
#1
Chapter 5: Aha. Oh my. Didn't expect the ending to be like that!
It was still good though. :)
Maybe you could post the alternate ending sometime?
SuperStarKMJ95 #2
Ah! This story was so good! Author-nim, please post the alternate ending too! :D
animeotakupooh
#3
I went O.O.... Seriously, I had Shibrows for a moment there! It was just not fair!!!!

Hahahaha, I am whining like a little child now, That just shows how good the story was. But I really wanted that scary ending... Could you put that up as well?? Pretty please with a cherry on top????
relishtea
#4
Ohh, I really liked this fict! haha
I hope you will put up an alternate ending ><

Great job!!
yoongsoshi
#5
just finished reading this fict :D
Wew, it's just a film .-. But, to be honest, i curious who the murder is
xElpidaHopex
#6
J-Just a movie? Oh my god, that was so .. whoa xD
You got me xD Strange ending xD
You made such an mysterious story end like this, you surprised me xP
magikarp
#7
AH! It was just a movie?!??!!! YOU HAD ME ALL FREAKED FOR NOTHING >.< And such a short story! Not one-shot, but more like... five-shot? xD
magikarp
#8
NO! POOR JUNG AH T_T<br />
And the y dances are funny xD
LonelyStar25
#9
NUUUUU YOU KILLED SEOBBIE T_T *Cries in a corner*<br />
But the stroy's quite interesting ;D<br />
Update soon~
B2STHart #10
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?!!! HOW COULD YOU KILL YOSEOB??!!! JESSSIEE??!!!!! DO YOU WANT ME TO CRY??!!!!!!