Torn

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What if you were abused at home?

 

And then you got a second chance, to leave the horrible place...

                                                                                                                      ...would you take it and leave everything behind?

Foreword

LADIDAAAH MY FIFTH STORY ANOTHER ONE FOR A FRIEND LALA 8D I am so high ahh lol. Happy that I finished this. It's really short because I only got the idea during first period at school and I finished it in my last class lol. Anyway, I hope you enjoy this :) And in the story, Yoseob isn't an idol ahaha

xoxo

 

OH BTW THANKYOU SOOO MUCH TO  king-me FOR MAKING THE BEAUTIFUL POSTER! She made heaps for me and they were soooo pretty and so I had to force myself to pick between all of them and I lowered it down to two and I couldn't go further than that haha THEY WERE SO NICE! Here's the link the the other posters haha, don't want them to go to waste without anyone else seeing how prettiful they are. ANYWAY, YEAH, YOU SHOULD TOTALLY GO TO HER FOR GRAPHIC DESIGNS BECAUSE SHE IS SO PRO LOL. And she's a fairly new shop :) I mean, she is a new shop because she opened on O8.11.11 haha. So yeah...HAPPY READING!

  

©SweetStrawberryy 2011

 

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jaejoongxx #1
nice nice! wow, you wrote/and writing lots of fiction...
Kawamiya #2
Oops, sorry double post... (to tell the truth*=) TT.TT My computer bugs a little
Kawamiya #3
I like the start but to tell the start... You lost me. They're arguing and suddently you put two people we don't know... <br />
"Christiant" and "her". Even though it's a oneshot. It's really confusing. And it's a really awkward ending... Though I understand... I found that it end too quickly and in total confusion. <br />
Anyway you style of writing is really nice.
LuluLovesSHINee #4
KYAHHHHH THAT GIF!!!!!(the story was awesome too
neversaynever #5
'Tips on how to improve' hm hm hm hm hmmmm >8D LOL it was so adorable <3 You ought to write one with yourself and jjong :P
mrsb2st #6
Whaaa.... So sad. It was really good though. I enjoyed it. Lol, it's weird cause my bro's name is Christian, and his gf's name is Holly!! Lol. Weird coincidence... Anyways, LOVE. The. Gif. Keke. So... YoSeob (if that makes any sense). ^^ and your poster is awesome!! I think Imma go check her out for meh stories... ^^ <br />
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:))
B2STHart #7
LOVE THE POSTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SOOOOOOOOOOOO PRETTY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOSEOB LOOKS HOT!!!!!!!!!!!
Nataliette #8
LOL. nice :D I LOVE the gif XD
B2STHart #9
OMG LOVE THE GIF!!!!! BUT....... my only comments are =.=
SweetStrawberryy #10
Ohh ty lol
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