Chapter 1: Late to the party but oh my gosh I love sedaeng so much like I can't??? Please tell me you'll update this because it's so damn amazing and as always, thanks for writing!

Chapter 1: Damn, you're good in writing.

Love them together so much<3 can't wait to see the remain part

Chapter 1: Nah, the pace is perfect, I guess it'll feel slow if you're the one writing it, but when I'm reading it for the first time everything flows perfectly, there's not a moment that feels clunky or unneeded. You could do flashforwards I guess, bits of IOI here and there, but I think it'll be more interesting to see them during the PD101 days, if only because we know all of that, since their IOI activities have only just started. The next two weeks with the reality show ought to give you more inspiration for that anyway.
Sejeong's mom tendencies are rather hilarious, so it's Somi sneaking out and being irresponsible that is the catalyst for Sejeong and Yoojung having their first conversation -- if she ever finds out, I think I'm going to need a bragging scene, haha. Oh and did Somi really sneak a phone while on the show? Because this is the third story I've read that had that tidbit, and maybe I'm just not following her social media updates enough, but I don't quite recall anything about her having a phone.

Can't wait to see more of this xD

Chapter 1: warning: so. much. rambling.

i'm gonna cry. there's another sedaeng fic and this is great and amazing and sweet and aaaaaaaaaaaakhsdklhks;ldf i seriously cannot contain all my feels right now. you have such wonderful writing. i love how you explain every moment, every detail so well with all the right words and god. i can't stop smiling. i love how you described sejeong's eyesmiles and smiles. those two can do wonders seriously and i could stare at them forever. she's just so lovely and i love how you described sejeong's outfit and ho w yoojung kind of hated how yellow, how bright it was and it's forever etched on her mind that yellow is sejeong. that how do i look moment though. for a second there, i was reminded of my main ship, dodaeng. i've always paired yoojung with doyeon bc how can you not. lol. they've been together since 3rd grade and now they're debuting. that's a long time and they've always been inseparable and cute together. aaah this fic is gonna be painful for me. i can already imagine myself being conflicted between the two but sedaeng isn't that bad and i'm glad there ar e other people shipping them. i've only seen a few which is sad. sighs. sejeong's too caring for her own good, tbh. she's always helping others that often times she forgets about herself but her caring side led her to yoojung and that's just lovely. this is so cute. i kind of dislike fics with slow pace bc i get really impatient but this will be worth it. i know and starting from, i'm gonna be thinking that the reason why yoojung got center during pick me is that sejeong helped her with i t. i wanna cry. seriously. this is too good. i love this. thank you!!! update soon!!!!!!! :]

Chapter 1: Ohh, I love the slow burn. I don't normally pair these two together but it's actually working really well here, I really enjoyed reading it!

I think I'd love to read more of this - their time during the show. I suppose it could work as flashbacks too. As long as the narrative includes stories about the progression of their relationship, that'd be awesome. I'm really enjoying getting to know this fic's 'SeDaeng' since you wrote them well in this chapter!

Looking forward to the next chapter!